Reviews for Crouching Fuuko, Hidden Tokiya
obsessed dreamer chapter 3 . 3/24/2011
WOW! a public declaration! lol, I love you too you porny slutty perv! hahaha!

great great ending! i love the devilish domon hahaha...

first that tokiya's in Fuuko's mother's bad books XD

love the smut, the position and foreplay was risque and way waaay hot! gotta love the sweet twist too!

and you my dear should go see a confessor after this! egad! hahahahahahahah! yay ESILY! XD
thepinkmartini chapter 3 . 3/24/2011
That was awesome! Sweet and hot!
thepinkmartini chapter 2 . 3/24/2011
Hilarious!
edie chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
love this story!but poor fuuko and tokiya.
obsessed dreamer chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
YOU DIRTY LITTLE SLUT! how dare you put something as trashy as this little rag. you miss, should learn how to say your prayers and to read the holy book! that will be a much worthwhile way of spending your time instead of writing things (dirty isn't even enough of an adjective to describe this abomination!) that guarantees the condemnation of your soul to hell!

if i was your mother, i'd lock you away in a convent never to lay eyes on anyone of the opposite gender!
Anne Raven chapter 2 . 3/22/2011
Wow! You never fail to impress and astound your readers Mia-sama. I love all your works... And this one is not just hot... It's also downright hilarious. Love it!
Chie TomoRii chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
awesome as always Mia-chan! :] I love how the chapter went and i just couldnt stop laughing whenever Mi-chan and Fuu-chan are caught red-handed and mishaps happen to the two of them with the next scene starting with an "I hate you" line. XD

and Mi-chan was suspended? LOL that is really something new. and he doesnt seem to care about it. XD

can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Shirayuki Sayura chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
AHAHA! i'ts so funny. Poor Mi-chan and Fuuko-chan, seems like they always get in trouble whenever they are together.

Great fic, I really can't wait to know what will happen next, hope they can do what they want next time, without any intruders

UPDATE SOON

AHAHAHAHAHA... (my jaw is so tired because of laughing too much and my stomach is hurt badly )
killerbee chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
CLIFFHANGER. Hahahaha, this is so damn good. I don't really mind how many more chapters it'll take for this to be finished, this is too good for only three chapters. XD

Great job! Looking forward to the next chap! :)
kyusetsuki satsuki chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
"that would be ke$ha." LMFAO
Wija chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
LMFAO!

That totally caught me off guard! Hahaha xD

I couldn't stop laughing when he came out out of nowhere.

Stupid Domon. xD
eirist chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
tokiya eating fuuko's personally cooked lunch is sooo sexy for me. o_O i can't figure out why. hahaha! what a crazy fic. i was laughing so hard when domon (that moron) knocked at the bedroom door. tokiya did break a lot of rules here. ahaha. he really doesn't have a stick up his ass to quote you. but waaaaaaaaaaah! there's still a 3rd chapter? please don't make me (US) wait! please!
SnowCharms chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
Lol, one interruption after another, they're going to seriously suffer from a lot of sexual frustration. Update!
blindhunteress chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
this is sooo good! its funny, the characterization is great. and i like the fact that you are coming from the angle that they actually did become "friends" after the tournament.

so anyway, thank you for sharing

AND please DO update..!
obsessed dremer chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
bwahahah! i though it was already completed but then again that was a pretty good teaser. daym! blue balls alert! hahahaah! and the condom exercise, bwhahahaha! if i was the nurse i'd be grinning like a cheshire cat too hee! XD
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