I really liked this. It's very interesting. I've been totally gaga over this pairing since I defeated N today. I can't wait to see them falling in love with each other. From what I see here, you are a fantastic writer, and hopefully a speedy one as well.

is good!please continue!

Wow, this is really good. This is so much more better than the floofy happy powdered sugar crap that I usually end up reading. The story is intense and I love how you really stayed true to N's personality. The only thing I would watch out for is some clichéd phrases you used here and there. I really can't wait for the next chapter :D

beautifull, riviting, a little creeped out by N and his decisios on her living conditions but I loved it anyways. maybe you should allow touko to be refusing in her eating and then have N feed her and she still refuses. Just my opinion though.

BEST POKEMON FANFIC OF BLACK AND WHITE EVER DUUUUUUDE!

Oooh, I really liked this! And I hope for more!

I really like this alternate ending to the game. Its so sad that Touko loses the majority of her pokemon, but I really like how you portrayed N. Locking up someone he wants to become his "friend" really seems like something he would do. Please keep writing!

Love this story! Isn't so ironic that N's doing to Touko what he condemned trainers to doing to pokemon? Oh~, I can just picture the look of horror on his face when he realizes that!

This is great!

I like how N is really almost barbaric in his methods to become "friends" with Touko. I mean, he hasn't had a lot of human interaction, he probably really doesn't know any better.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

I...LOVE this! Please continue it's such

a great turn of events, totally love it!

And I know what you mean with the game .

-had the same reaction-

I luff it!

People sometimes don't get how...strange N is. I've seen him written as a mysterious stranger that spends time hitting on White, I've seen him written as a man-child (which, he is, but I mean he's portrayed as a hyper little kid, which isn't really what he is...), I've seen him as a lot of really weird things. But, from what I see, you're doing a pretty good job keeping him in character. 3

You do have a couple spelling mistakes, but not too many. Like..."We'll return her in one peace" near the beginning should be "We'll return her in one piece".

Also, I'm a little confused. Are you using English or Japanese names in this? I can understand keeping Touko/Touya no matter the language, because Hilda/Hilden is kinda...bleh. But you use Ghetsis, which is the English name, and Belle, which is the Japanese name. Then again, whenever I write for this, I always write Bianca as Belle (not on purpose), so maybe I should just stop hypocritically criticizing that and shut up. XD

Out of curiosity, how fast do you update? I want moooooore~

Seriously. Write more soon.

~Night

I love it! 3

Can't wait for the next chapter~

OMG I LOVE IT! 3

it is like a AU story .

the story is really different from the other i have read

keep it up!

(i really suck at writing review srry!)