|Reviews for The Underground Game|
| Guest chapter 50 . 5/2/2017
OMG! O.O MUST... HAVE... MORE... XD Lol, this has to be one of THE top 5 FFs I've EVER read! Epic job!
~Loving every chapter,
| A normal person chapter 50 . 12/23/2016
God, you never seem to disappoint.
I've read this probably about ten times by now and the lost prince and they have been some of the best stories i've read. I love how you can combine the two in a way others haven't even thought of. Stay awesome.
| Random reason chapter 50 . 9/21/2016
i so desperately wan't- no need you to continue! This is the best fan fiction I've read and I've read a lot of fan fiction. I just realized how much free time I have.
| Guest chapter 50 . 9/1/2016
I would love to see more of your stories.
| Blacknovelist chapter 50 . 3/30/2016
I've been sitting on my hands trying to get work done before I go on a review binge for stories, except I finished reading all these for the first time
at least two days ago (day three for the win) and I still can't stop thinking about this whole thing. Every time I try thinking of a different story or something it just wheels me back again into the headcanons or stories or the damn equivalent of fanfiction of a fanfiction in my brain. I feel like that kind of says a lot.
I'm not very familiar with a lot of the older Sonic games or shows or comics outside of my weird habit of reading dozens of wiki articles at a time, but ever since learning about Sonic Underground I've been so caught up on the idea of it merging with game canon myself (I'm 1000% for Prince Sonic who leaves with the blessings of his family and also 1000% here for the Lost Prince Sonic Hedgehog dangit), and man the way you've done it is so... so... Cool! And fascinating. Absolutely fascinating. With Sonic letting Eggman go and leaving Mobius behind at some point, what an idea what an idea, and! And then that part with the Oracle giving his siblings those pictures! And they see him happy and they're shocked because "he's never been that happy before" and hooooooo boy that thrilled me. That was one of my favourite parts, right next to the stories from Secret Rings and The Black Knight, and the last story especially. Definitely can't forget the last one.
...I meant that literally. I literally can't forget about the last one. Every time I stop I can't help but think of Sonia and Manic realizing how powerful their brother is, or how the aftermath of Sonic's fight with the Eggpocalypse went, and then Sonic's freaking response to Eggman's taunts...! "Things change. I changed. And these days, I like change" and then "Let's show these people just how much we've changed", man oh man, what good lines. I can't stop thinking about those lines. Or the hypothetical ending of that fight. Aleena was already aware of how strong Sonic is/would be, but Manic and Sonia were so shell-shocked, thinking up reactions alone keep me occupied for ages! And and and, Sonic's promise to what he'd do if Eggman ever came back and just, I can't stop thinking about what might've happened after that damn fight! I love how I can't stop thinking about it because it's been so long! Since I've found a story I could keep enjoying for ages and ages afterwards! I don't think I'll ever really get bored of thinking about it either. I can tell.
I could keep going. I could mention how I loved it when Knuckles realized how much Sonic trusts them, or when Tails got Sonic to test out his armor by shooting at him with a laser gun, oh oh and I mentioned it already but I simply adored the one with Lancelot and Sonic talking because I simply loved Black Knight and I love the way you wrote Lancelot's character because in SatBK he was definitely one of my favourite knights, but I'm still wary of punching up walls of text so let's blast forwards a bit more.
I love your interpretation of the characters, and your stories somehow don't leave me wondering where they are or what they're doing, either. It's so easy to fill in the gaps with my imagination since there's no unnecessary information or huge chunks that are intimidating to read. There's no need for me to say "there's something here and another thing there, but where's x and y?", or any time when I had to slow down to properly imagine it in my head because of that. Although, if I had to file a complaint, it would most likely be that I still don't know what order any of these poor stories are supposed to be in, which gets a bit... disorienting for me when I try to figure it out for myself! But even then, it just makes it fun to twist it all around and figure it out, I guess, even if I don't know where things land on the Sonic timeline with my meagre knowledge of the old games (I always assumed the last story was the "most recent" of the lot, although there was that one time he went out with Sonia and Manic in the old ship that crashed and when he was eating with them and Tails but they might not've seen his full strength then?).
I can't articulate how much I love this and how fun it is for me to read it and think about it non-stop, and yknow, although I'd be ecstatic to see more from this, (I've read Wrong or Right? already too and all I can say is the way you write Super Sonic is cool as hell and oh man oh man do I love it) I'm content with what you've written because what you've written is some damn good stuff! And, even though I'm running out of things to say right now, I bet I'll remember more stuff later (I'm pretty forgetful and well, it's been two days).
I'm glad you found inspiration from these stories and your friend, and I'm glad you wrote this story! To write and post so much... that's something I need to work towards too. It's so inspiring to see you made it to the end. Because then people like me have the chance to read such a cool story with such cool ideas and gosh, I've just gotta say thank you for it.
| Guest chapter 37 . 8/4/2015
This thing is so ridiculous. I was crying. This is my inspiration from now on. But right now I'm gonna read it again and try not to watch km e up the household with my laughing. Sonic is ridiculous and I love how clueless tails is.
| Guest chapter 33 . 8/4/2015
Oh my god it took me hours to defeat that level! But it's good practice for the big boss! Its really sad that's it's the only sonic game I own.
| Moe43 chapter 50 . 12/19/2014
Really enjoyed reading all of these, you're amazing at writing!
| BlueMew24 chapter 50 . 8/5/2014
This was amazing. I hope you will write more in this series.
| FerrumFaustus chapter 6 . 3/29/2014
The original poem:
First they came for the Socialists, and I did not speak out- Because I was not a Socialist.
Then they came for the Trade Unionists, and I did not speak out- Because I was not a Trade Unionist.
Then they came for the Jews, and I did not speak out- Because I was not a Jew.
Then they came for me-and there was no one left to speak for me.
“First they came …” is a provocative poem attributed to pastor Martin Niemöller about the cowardice of German intellectuals following the Nazis' rise to power and the subsequent purging of their chosen targets, group after group. So I'd say it's very fitting here and you nailed it despite not knowing about the original. Kudos to you! :3
Also, what chapter of Archie comics did you take it from? 'Cuz I don't really remember it mentioned there.
| ryu238 chapter 35 . 1/26/2014
That advice you gave for Australia reminds me of a RPG that's partly based on Urban Rumors...
| becca chapter 50 . 10/31/2013
do you think there's a possibility you could continue number fifty? I'd like to see more of it You're a great writer
| Velmet chapter 50 . 8/25/2013
... awesome... dude your a genius O
| InkMango the FABULOUS chapter 48 . 12/13/2012
i know what sonic's thinking about with the fighting eggie with music thing.
| InkMango the FABULOUS chapter 7 . 12/12/2012
aaaaawww! how cute!