Reviews for Hey
JoKuL FrOsTi chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I love this.
hamaiasa chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
:D really well done! I love it!
Code Purple chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Well, I think this poem is great! Something that might turn people off, though, is that you didn't have commas after the stanzas.

Also, in the summary, you didn't have capital letters, and you spelled 'Juli' wrong.

In the stanza, "I runaway", it should be, "I run away"

In the stanza, "And ill make them grey", it should be, "I'll make them gray".

Other then that, I think it really emphasizes how Juli felt throughout the book, all squished down into this poem. Keep writing!

Code Purple
andorra ankara chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Lovely poem!

I think you should make more of these:D

Flipped was really nice, and this poem really does summarize it in an adorable manner.