Reviews for Carmine
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31
Aww! Cute! Make more! 3
cherry chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
it was so cute
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
Wh- "satin lips"? Really? ...I won't say any more, because I know better than to make fun of another writer's works, but that was so sickly sweet I'm nauseous. (That, or wasabi gouda was a bad idea.)

Proper grammar and spelling still (and always) appreciated.
Ravengal101 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Awww! That was adorable. I love the descriptions, I especially loved "pianist fingers" I dunno why but I just did.
Silver dagger chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
AWWWWWWW!How cute and romantic!AND I LOVE NEJI!
kenni no. 1 chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
AHH! the fluff! it burns!


inknomad chapter 1 . 4/23/2011

*throws in a Despicable Me quote for the craiic*

That was brilliant :'D I really liked that opening paragraph about the sunset. Really melancholic and poetic and stuffs :3
JWzipper chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
MY EYES! Why! So... Much... FLUFF! ;D Jk.

Haha, great shot! I can actually see this happening. I like it!

Till Next Time!

Ja Ne!

glitterings chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Really sweet and beautiful.

ShadowedSaint chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
that was soo cute 0.0 it was just so so adorable. *overloads from fluffyness*
River Flows Backwards chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Awwwwwww! How corny! This was really cute _
adeadlyrose chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I love it , its so cute , well written 3
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Awwww! FLUFFINESS! _ I do so enjoy it. (too much for my own good, but that's a good thing)

I also liked your description in the beginning! Neat!

Keep writing!

kenzinator chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Aww...This was extremely cute! I loved it! :D
Tibbadeebaa chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Cute Almost can imagine it..
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