|Reviews for The Everchanging Shapes|
| Malty chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
'Hasn't he decided that everything is Sasuke and Sasuke is everything?' Oh God, this story is so good, so good! I love that it's snippets but also a complete story letting you fill things in yourself. It's exactly the right balance of angst and action, because the problem is often that Naruto can be contemplative and angsty about Sasuke in the manga but he's not by nature a mopey character, so how to explore Naruto's angst in that area without overplaying it? But this is perfect; it shows his dedication, why he's acting the way he is, (to keep Sasuke close), and his exhaustion makes sense because Sasuke is so infuriating at times, but you feel the love for Sasuke because deep down he really does want to stay but doesn't know how. So he starts fights and criticises. And this part?
'Naruto closes his eyes. He's tired of being questioned and reprimands himself mentally for not seeing it coming. He musters enough energy to wrap his arm around his head and caress his hair smoothly as he leaves a light kiss on his temple. It doesn't really matter, does it?' I would like to marry this part please.
Love it, even if it's a sad read. Good stuff.
| eternal-butterfly chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
im not sure how to describe this beside from poetic beauty.
amazingly beautiful. its wonderful the different discriptions youve got here, its simple and sweet! just perfcet!
keep the amazing work coming please1 x x
| Sweven chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
:cries: That was so sad. Intense and heartbreaking. Naruto was kinda OOC, but it was wonderful nonetheless _
| Ninny-na chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
This was good o:
Sad, intense, but good :D