|Reviews for Ashes, Ashes We All Fall Down|
| lynntjax chapter 20 . 9/1/2013
Awesome story! You should be very proud!
| Kmelv3130 chapter 20 . 12/31/2012
That was beautiful
| Ivegotit chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
i so love your stories and think i can not thank enough if i try. this one took little bit long to finish but was it roller coaster! i think you are awesome.
| kneon chapter 9 . 12/31/2012
I read the first part & it is so good. I haven't cried so much since I read Red Line. Your story is so heartbreaking, but with so much hope.
| lucy1521 chapter 9 . 12/18/2012
First I have to say your story is very interesting. I also wanted to say that there are ones who are just as you described in your story, but not all dom/sub relationship is different in there own way. The way you have written is grouping the Bdsm community in a very abusive cruel manner, and taking advantage of ones that have been adused in there that is the only type of people that would like that lifestyle which is simply not come from normal childhoods with no abuse at and sub relationships vary as to the degree to which a person submits but it is not all bad. Doms that look out for the welfare of there sub will take care of there needs sexual,emotional,physical. The aftercare is very loving and most cases both will discuss the scenes to see what there partner liked or didn't like and if any changes need to be you mentioned in the story there are safe words usually green,yellow,red to help the Dom measure the intensity to which he can continue to way you have written tells me you have a very negative attitude toward that lifestyle, and that is your right as a person, but if you read a little more on this subject you will find that some of the relationships can be very strong and loving.
| MaydayLover1 chapter 20 . 11/24/2012
I cried throughout the entire story but this chapter by far made me cry the worst... You are such an amazing write, able to hit every emotion. You should honestly think about changing out the character names and trying to get this published as a book.
| belleveloso chapter 20 . 11/24/2012
| Kree-on-toast chapter 19 . 10/23/2012
Ah, it was in here!
god that last chapter... I'm fairly sure my almost husband thinks im crazy bawling my eyes out every few minutes at a computer screen.
you would think he would be used to it by now after all this time :P
with the mostest love from the other side of the world
| Sarah Amin chapter 20 . 9/23/2012
this story always makes me cry .. he's been through too much , he spent all his life fighting for something he didnt know .. he wanted love but all he got was pain !
| Sarah Amin chapter 14 . 9/23/2012
The worst thing here is both can not be blamed since it's not either their faults .. he didnt ask for it and she was shielded from it ..
| Sarah Amin chapter 10 . 9/23/2012
Teenagers are selfish creatures .. all she saw was her reputation not the torture her father went through as a child , as a teenager and as an adult
| Sarah Amin chapter 8 . 9/23/2012
I dont like the BDSM concept .. but is this for real .. I know there are dom/sub relationships that go wrong and sometimes abuse is involved , but then again the idea of someone hitting you in any capacity is abuse ..
| Sarah Amin chapter 7 . 9/23/2012
I feel so bad for both of them .. He was so broken and damaged for so long , but he also knew what it felt to not have anyone and still left Beth and bella .. Yes they managed without him but still he abandoned him knowing full well the consequences of it
| Sydney chapter 20 . 7/15/2012
I really enjoyed the sequel. Better than the original story, i think. I didn't need tissues for the ending, but almost. It takes A LOT to get me emotional over a story.
| Sydney chapter 9 . 7/14/2012
I really enjoyed this story.