Reviews for Ashes, Ashes We All Fall Down
iammonkey1 chapter 20 . 4/23
i just need to say this isnt what real bdsm is about it can be loving and not hate chapter 20 . 12/27/2015
I read this story in 2 days and loved it , im sad that you didnt put more of elizabeth and fella growing up in it , but im happy with the happy ending but also sad i know they died and everyone older then them died , it hard to think about dying and sad to know it will happen , many of the ones i have read dont included them dying old in the end , i happy you finshed your story , thank you for writing down your imagnashion for me to read , thank you
cejsmom chapter 20 . 9/25/2015
This is such a full, rich, heartbreaking story with wonderfully developed characters who come through so much to always be together. Nothing ever got old. It was endearing and special and oh so sad at times. Brilliantly written. I'm sad it didn't get the attention it deserves. I hope I can maybe bring some to it now.
cor80 chapter 20 . 6/15/2015
my heart hurts ... really well done x
Nannyjojo chapter 20 . 6/13/2015
Yeah I needed tissues, but it was so worth it.
Edward just couldn't go on with out Bella.
So sad, but in a way the still got their HEA.
I loved this story from start to finish and it had me hooked.
Nannyjojo chapter 19 . 6/13/2015
My heart is pounding, but oh my I fell in love with Edward even more on this chapter.
Yeah he may still crave the pain at times, but he has come so far.
He has never stopped loving Bella.
Even though he did hurt his family for a while I am so proud of him.
Nannyjojo chapter 18 . 6/13/2015
Well I think I need to leave it here till later.
I don't want red puffy eyes before I go out. lol

So glad that they did work it out. I think it will only make them stronger.
They just seem to be growing.
Nannyjojo chapter 17 . 6/13/2015
Oh Carlisle, you are sneaky.
But maybe it could help.
Maybe they won't get back together maybe they will but they may at least get some closure.
Nannyjojo chapter 16 . 6/13/2015
I think my heart is breaking for them even more right now.
So glad they are safe for now, but doesn't mean someone else won't come after them.
Nannyjojo chapter 15 . 6/13/2015
God this must be so hard for both of them right now.
I'm not sure they could come back from this, but hope that they can.
Again I am wishing that I read the last chapter first. Lol.
I am so close though so I will not.
Nannyjojo chapter 14 . 6/11/2015
I thinking maybe I should have done what a lot of others do and read the last chapter first to see if it is a hea. lol.
This is tearing me apart right now.
Nannyjojo chapter 13 . 6/11/2015
I think my heart id breaking in two also.
I get that this could be the only way for Edward to get things under control, but they are gonna go after him.
I am not sure either he and Bella could survive this.
Nannyjojo chapter 12 . 6/11/2015
Can't this family catch a break.
Poor Edward and Bella.
Nannyjojo chapter 11 . 6/11/2015
Why am I not surprised that this was all connected to Aro.
I just feel for the right now and dread to think what it means for Edward.
Nannyjojo chapter 10 . 6/11/2015
Poor Beth.
There are some nasty people out there.
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