Reviews for Comfort Food
rohan chapter 7 . 3/8/2014
next day harry went for a walk with Shelly and meet Eddie sitting on the Bench feeling sad Shelly feel sorry for him but not Harry "remember stay a hell from daughter "roared Harry as he grab him by his shirt "Look man I know Vada is too young but I love her I don't know why but I do"yell harry and throw on the ground "HARRRY THAT ENUGH" said Shelly and Harry walk away "SICK KID GO TO JAIL" Yell Harry "Harry just stop" said Shelly and she help Eddie up "are you all right Eddie" said Eddie and harry walk away "yes I fine I have to stay away from Vada" said Eddie "look I sorry abut Harry he dose not mine to do this" said Shelly as she walk him to the bench "how is she" ask Eddie "well she bite upset because Harry brock you guy up but for me I went Vada be happy so do you love her" ask Shelly "yes she make me happy and make me forget bad stuff in my life" said Eddie I think you a vary good friend and I think you guys spent more time together but one rule don't feed her to much ok" said Shelly "ok thank you" said Eddie "went to come to my house you might surprise Vada said Shelly as she put her hand on his back
Ellie chapter 7 . 5/13/2013
Lol this story is cool! :P
Alex B. Goode chapter 7 . 7/4/2012
Great work. You should definitely make a sequel.
Alex B. Goode chapter 6 . 7/4/2012
Rock on!
Alex B. Goode chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
Neat.
Alex B. Goode chapter 4 . 7/4/2012
Outstanding.
Alex B. Goode chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
Nice.
Alex B. Goode chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Neat work.
Alex B. Goode chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Cool beans.