|Reviews for Celluloid|
| Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Hahahahaha! It's Edward! :) great short story though. It was cute and sweet
| Arc Morpheus chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
My dearest darling,
This story had me enthralled from the beginning, I was so sure the main character was a women all the way through I kept thinking,
Yep been there seen that and then at the end you blow me away with one sentence!
"Ah, Edward. there you are. We've just had some great news." I looked at him, confused.
I mean you so got me honey, I was floored by this, so well written and the emotions dripping out of every word and paragraph gripped me.
Thank you I can not say that enough my darling you are a fantastic writer xxx
Bravo sweety xx
| paula pattinson greatbatch chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Bloody hell i loved this one! Why is it only a one shot for goodness sake! I would love to see how this panned out babe so if you ever decide to add to it let me know i just love it x
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Oh. Interesting twist there !
| joayla chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
That was fantastic! I loved the description of the writer up all hours I know I have been there with you on that front !
| 84gemstone chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Mouse you know how to make me laugh. Beer not wine so you lol loved it bb x
| scrosby66 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
I love being surprised, it really makes my day :) Thanks for writing!
| pbswimmer chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
What an interesting one-shot, Mousey! I really had no idea the author was Edward the whole time, so that was a nice surprise at the end. Despite the uber-long stories in this fandom, did you know that the average novel is about 100K words? I learned THAT one the hard way, LOL. Good work!
| HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
ahh that twist at the end! Seriously hun...YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF THEM! You could so turn this into a multichap down the road...just sayin'. You once again took me on a ride that I didn't expect (and I'd only read the start of this...I hadn't seen it to the end). Wonderful piece hun. Brilliant as always! xxx
| texasbella chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
That was fun! Loved the twist at the end...I really assumed I was reading about a single MOM (or Mum for you!). You do realize that you've got a good start to a full blown tale here don't you? Would be interesting to see how the filming goes and what kind of relationship develops. Anyhoo...great job luv!
| luvkiss1973 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
yay great story i'm glad u posted
u know u will get ur story done and it will get published, i'm so proud of u for keeping up with it
give me more jackson porn now woman lol
keep up good work