Reviews for Breaking Him
stargazerdown chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
O.o
ofClockworkCandles chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
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*applause*

I love it- darkness and all. How they just don't want to be alone- I think more for each other's sakes than their own even. Beautiful- in a strange, sad, kinda twisted way- as only a very brave writer can be.

You have my respect as a writer.
All The Good Names Taken chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This was so hauntingly beautiful. It was terrifying, yet so powerful I couldn't stop reading. If only there were more. It's a really fantastic little drabble, and I think I will carry one line with me;

" They are screaming for each other, despite the pain it took to draw a breath, because losing one another is worse than death."

The image is just so striking. Horrible, but so well-done.
ImLostForever chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Wow. That's dark.
toeki chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
very intense writing, dark and beautiful . im always amazed when someone manages to get so much emotion and intensity in so few words
jaredpaderlecki chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Oooh! You should carry this on and make this chapter a prolgue? It would be great! :)
Vesenia chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Holly shit, that was marvelous! :D
LoveTheColours chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Wow. Just wow. That was really good, if sad. It was just so powerful, all the emotions.
Tammy chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Very intense. I love how they're more concerned for each other than for themselves.
ngaerjpgpioubghpignawogib chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Wow. Not having a good day, are they?

Poignantly written; good job.
mustangwoman chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Wonderfully intense and delightfully angsty!