Reviews for The Invisible Line |
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NeeNee246 chapter 11 . 12/27/2024 I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you so much for sharing this story! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 10 . 12/27/2024 I WAS SO WORRIED! After all they've been through! Bella made the right choice! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 9 . 12/26/2024 Oh my goodness! I love them! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 8 . 12/26/2024 This story is fantastic! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 7 . 12/26/2024 Goodness! Will they ever figure sh*t out!? ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 6 . 12/26/2024 These two! o.O |
NeeNee246 chapter 5 . 12/26/2024 OH MY GOODNESS! O.O |
NeeNee246 chapter 4 . 12/26/2024 I love them! I love this story! I am off to read more! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 3 . 12/26/2024 I am really loving this story! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 2 . 12/26/2024 This is fantastic! ;) |
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 12/26/2024 Oh goodness! They are so adorable in a dysFUNctional way! ;) |
Jenycullen chapter 11 . 9/21/2023 I really really really loved this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
dazzled eyes22 chapter 11 . 9/4/2023 Thanks for sharing their story. Wishing you all the best. |
dazzled eyes22 chapter 10 . 9/3/2023 Bella and Edward's future really came together. They found a home, spent their first Christmas together alone as a couple, and got engaged. I liked the reaction of their mothers to the ring on Bella's finger. I'm glad for Rosalie, but I'm also disappointed that neither of her best friends was there and that Bella and Rose won't be each other's Maid of Honor. I can understand Emmett's mother being angry at them. Rosalie's mom should be too. After that confrontation with the redhead, I was hoping Edward's actual number would be low, like 3 or 4. Nine does not convey devotion, and that crap about him imagining her while with each gal made it worse. Ugh! Bella losing her job has always been a worry with the marketplace as bad as it was. I understand her having to go to New Mexico to prove that she had the skills to get the position. The important thing is that she made the right choice to turn it down. I wonder what she's going to do for employment though. |
dazzled eyes22 chapter 9 . 9/3/2023 Thanks for the backstory and advice to re-read the one-shot. I’m glad everything worked out for Bella and Edward as they became comfortable as lovers. The snarky banter was still there mixed with the romance. I’m happy Rosalie is in love too. Emmett seems like a great guy for her. It was lovely that Rose could see the difference in her girl and congratulated Edward for crossing the line. Leave it to her to deliver the best lineDoes the motion in the ocean match up to the size of his prize?” LMAO. I enjoyed Bella and Edward getting caught by the police officer and then by Esme walking in on them kissing. Their parents took the news really well. I loved Bella’s sweet moment with her dad. |