Reviews for The Invisible Line
slc6548 chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
EdwardandBella4everFan chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Such a wonderful writer, such a wonderful story. Thank you
beachcomberlc chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
You've just made my day! I've loved this fic since the beginning and I'm thrilled that you came back and finished it. I really, really like these two a lot and I volunteer to move in with them as their nanny so I can watch them go about their daily lives. You think Edward would build a nice guest-house addition for me?
The toy truck scene made me grin in a been-there-done-that sort of way.
I'll always read anything you write whenever you come back to us.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Thank you for the update! It gave me a chance to start at the beginning and re-read from start to finish. Their romance was one for the records!
Reader-many chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
The important thing is that you could finish it, thanks for sharring I love this characters
Thank you
2old4fanfic chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Sweetly ended, although the incredibly helpful husband shows that this is fiction! And i know there are husbands like that in rl but I've never met one! Good to see you finish up, even if it took a while
majose chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
That was great, thanks! These three (I am including Rose) were so much fun. I loved how their friendship always came through the story.
debslmac chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
:) loved this story
Zitta1992 chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Melee03 chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
How I have loved this story. I will miss these two and their little family. Please continue to write, be it original fic, fan fic or a shopping list...I'd happily read anything written by you xxx
Mom23xx chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
I loved this. Depicted real life and how it really goes...leaky milk and quickies when you can get them. Hugs to you!
SofiaB chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Oh I'll miss this! I love these two and their relationship, and its fun seeing them as parents! Thanks for writing!
D Pattinson chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Awww, such a cute ending. Glad you were able to overcome your writer's block and get back into it. How can we find your soon to be published work when it's available? I'd love to continue following you on your journey
elizabeth bennette chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Thank you- love the story.

Love this Rose too.
trishchar chapter 11 . 3/8/2016
Thank you for writing this!
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