Reviews for The Invisible Line
cejsmom chapter 11 . 3/7
I felt as if I was there, with them, for the entire chapter. That's what I was trying to say on FB. You bring the reader in and make them feel as if they're a participating character. And you do it very well. I'm all very happy my kids are now older and I'm no longer breastfeeding anymore. Lol! Awesome job my friend. Thank you for finishing.
Lost In Fanfiction chapter 11 . 3/7
Thank you :)
TrulyOutrageous chapter 11 . 3/7
I love their HEA.
lillianolivia.white chapter 11 . 3/7
What a nice surprise! You wrapped this story up nicely.
Maplestyle chapter 11 . 3/7
Love, love, love, loved this! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! 3
Cici G chapter 11 . 3/7
I'm so sorry to hear you had a difficult year and I'm glad to see your rebuilding your confidence. I've enjoyed this fic as well as the others you have written.
Fwukawesome chapter 10 . 2/23
This was absolutely to die for. One of the best ever. Why oh why did u stop writing!?
anonymous chapter 10 . 2/19
this is still one of my favorite stories. hope you update soon!
Rolange chapter 10 . 1/31
Fuck! The angst when she went to New Mexico!

I'm serious, I love these two!

Want more soon
Rolange chapter 8 . 1/30
I flove this story!

In fact, I hate to admit it, but I wish I had a boyfriend like EdwardHe's so patient with Bella. I almost get the impression he would even accept just being platonic friends if it meant always being there for each other. Almost.

More please!
fatpotatoe chapter 10 . 1/24
Brilliant story. Great writing.
fatpotatoe chapter 9 . 1/24
A whole chapter of Rose/Uncensored would be marvelous.
fatpotatoe chapter 4 . 1/23
Golden.
LKSM36 chapter 10 . 11/9/2015
Just read this again because I love it. I hope you get to finish it up. This is one of my favorite stories. Their chemistry is wonderful.
Kat chapter 10 . 10/24/2015
One of the best fanfics I've ever read x Thanks for making my day
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