Reviews for The Invisible Line
REgrrl chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
An extremely good time.
vin chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
i fucking love this story!
Hadley Hemingway chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Was checking out your other work and ran across this one - love, love it! Thanks for your thoughtfulness in donating such a great little o/s!
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
It's too bad it took Bella so long to finally give in!
Mellylicious chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
The only thing wrong with this is that there wasn't enough of it lol :):):)
FizzyPop's'n'FlipFlops chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
I've had this open in a tab for ages, but i dont know what i've been putting it off! It was great! It would have been funny if their mothers did turn up and saw'evidence' that proved them to be right all along...lol
decode97 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
i loved it ! are you thinking of continuing this story ?
SassYNoleS chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
LOVED IT ! WOW FUNNY & FULL OF GOOEY GOODNESS !
BellaEdwardlover1991 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
wow, this left me hot and bothered... time to jump my fiance :) great one shot!
ilovealion chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I went to look at your profile pics for DIMD and saw this one-shot... Had to read it. What a great little story with UST oozing from every word. Loved it. Thanks for writing.
theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
The UST in this was absolutely spectacular. Loved all the almosts. Wish we'd gotten a little more past the morning after to be sure they'd make this work. But I have no doubt. they're clearly meant to be.
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I loved this! They had such an awesome relationship, but damn that sex definitely sounded worth the line crossing!
Kickinl8tr chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
i needed some naughtieness thank you thank you this was perfect lemon and a laugh and lots of naughty thoughts .. xxx
FavesCoordinator chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I loved this! These two are so perfect together! I wish I knew what happened next... Did Esme get the grandbabies she wanted? :)
spanishtwihard chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
OH MY GOSH! I loved this story, it is so sweet! I want my very own Edward just like this one. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us! You are incredibly talented.
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