Reviews for The Invisible Line
anonymous chapter 9 . 2/22/2015
missing your story! hope you update soon!
GeekChic12 chapter 9 . 2/5/2015
Awwww. I'm kicking myself for forgetting to read this when it was first posted. I love these two so much. I love that he didn't make her feel too guilty for not giving in sooner. I adore this foul-mouthed Rose. Another great chapter. Thanks!
anonymous chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
love this story! cant wait for the next chapter! though sad that it's coming to an end.. hope you have a lot more chapters to treat your readers to!
pauleen chapter 9 . 1/26/2015
About time she let herself be happy he wants her. I cringe as she does at the times she refused him. But he is a smart guy. Knowing she was not ready to give them a chance.
robertpatzlover09 chapter 9 . 1/25/2015
so good
CandyCentric chapter 9 . 1/18/2015
Awesome read! :)
rocklesson86 chapter 9 . 1/1/2015
I like this story. I cannot wait for more.
cherryhilz chapter 9 . 12/27/2014
Love this! :)
Lurecyka chapter 9 . 12/20/2014
Ohhh! So happy for the update :-) this story is so good :-) thanks bb xxx
SLKerouac chapter 9 . 12/17/2014
Bella and Edward spent the night and then the whole weekend together. It was all about them satisfying their need for each other. They even learned more about each other. About how long they had both wanted more with each other. Bella admitted to Edward that she was scared. Rose finally got together with Bella and knew just by looking at Bella that her and Edward had finally gotten together. She was still mad that Bella did not answer any of her calls during the weekend. Talking Rose ended up telling Bella that she was in love. Bella was surprised and wanted to know more about this man. Rose invited Bella and Edward for a dinner party at Emmett's the following weekend. Edward and Bella were surprised at were Emmett lived. The dinner went well. Edward and Emmett liked each other. Rose was happy about Edward and Bella being together. On their way home Bella had Edward pull over. He was surprised and they were almost caught by the police. The officer knew what was going on and told them to finish their "conversation" at home. On their way back Bella talked about wanting to know if Edward would move. She talked about them buying something. Edward was willing to do what Bella wanted. At work Bella was finishing up an article. Edward came to take Bella for lunch. She left with him, getting into his truck. Edward had his surprise. Bella had to be patient which was hard for her. She saw that Edward had parked across from a for sale sign in front of a house. An man was there too. Edward explained that this agent had several houses to show them today and condos the next. The first house was bad. The second was small but a nice lot. The third was over their budget. Edward talked about her father knowing what was happening. That they could have him look at the house to see what renovations could be done. Edward took Bella back to work and gave her the lunch he picked up for her. Worked continued and one of Bella's office mates talked to her about moving too fast with the house and Edward. Bella was then angry after her meeting. She told this person that she needed her facts. That she was planning the rest of her life with someone that she has always loved. That she has known Edward for a very long time. Lived with him too. When Bella got home Edward was making dinner. He told her that he had to go to a meeting with his father and would be gone for four days. Edward had plans for the rest of the night as he was leaving the next day. It was now close to Thanksgiving. Edward and Bella were home. Esme walked in on Edward kissing Bella and having her pinned to the counter. She just wanted to know how long this had been going on. Edward told her a few months. Esme was so happy. She told them that she had been waiting for this to happen. Edward had told Esme that she wanted this for a long time. Edward and Bella told Esme that they would put away the groceries. Esme was probably on the phone with Renee about Edward and Bella finally being together. Thanksgiving dinner was going well. Esme and Renee along with Carlisle were happy about Edward and Bella. Charlie was wondering what was happening. Bella and Charlie talked a little. He was upset that he found out that the house was not for Bella but for Edward and Bella. Bella told her father that Edward was who she wanted to be with. That he was treating her well. Charlie just wanted to make sure that everything that was happening is what Bella wanted. Charlie left the kitchen and Edward came in. Bella to him about what Charlie was worried about but then told Edward not to worry. They took out dessert out to their parents and went back to the kitchen. Edward told Bella that he wanted to spend some of their Thanksgiving alone. that this was going to be the first of many. What happens now? What does Charlie think about the house? Will more happen between Bella and Edward? Does he have a plan for the future? What is happening with Rose and Emmett? Does Edward and Bella have their forever? Next!
cejsmom chapter 9 . 12/15/2014
Oh I loved this update so much! I'll wait forever for the rest!
Noelluna chapter 9 . 12/14/2014
Loved getting an email with an update! Love your edward and Bella so much. Their banter is rest and they're transitioning to a relationship smoothly. It's really sweet how everyone is reacting to the news. Look forward to more!
Cared chapter 9 . 12/14/2014
Ah, that's lovely. Thanks!
jayhawkbb chapter 9 . 12/14/2014
Such a great chapter and worth every bit of awkwardness and pain these kids had to endure to get here. Can't wait to see where you take them next!

xxoo
chicalicious chapter 9 . 12/13/2014
Very sweet! I'm absolutely overjoyed that they are finally together and everyone knows it! I'm really excited about Rose and Emmett's relationship as well!

-C
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