|Reviews for The Invisible Line|
| wonderous chapter 1 . 1/13
pleaaaaaaaaaaase make this into a story , bella and edward have so much chemistry ! it's crazy and i love , please ? pretty fucking please with cheese on top ?!
| beckaboo924 chapter 1 . 1/4
| jennayg123 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Loved this! Such a fun story!
| BelleBiter chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
That was hilarious and hot… my two favourite h-words in the bedroom. Thanks for a great little story.
| Tashakcooks chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
| GorGirl chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Finally together forever!
| shaz308 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Great one shot thanks
| blue022 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
| NKubie chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
Thanks to Mel on TLS for rec'ing this little gem of lemony goodness.
And thanks to you for sharing your talent for words and perviness. ;)
| Maia chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Hi! Please continue writing this, or write something like this with multiple chaps. This is amazing! You are an amazing writer. I am a sucker for stories like these.
I am so happy reading it. Gah! So sweet!
| BlackheartedBella chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I lovvveeeeed it :):):):)
| HDan chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I dont know how many time I have read this one shot ! I just love it ! I cant get enough :D Ty for sharing.. :))
| mdsngrc chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
I would absolutely love to get a little more of these two. That was so good. :D
| yayasimone chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
What a delightful story. You have a gift for dialogue.
| great2read chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
that was so awesome