Reviews for The Invisible Line
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
I freaking loved this! My favorite type of stories are the friends to lovers. Squeeeee. Completely loved how they shared their first kiss. I love that he clearly, as well as her, have loved each other all this time. Pushing and pulling, until they just exploded. Again, squeeeee. Rose was really fun. This whole chapter was really fun. Looking forward to the journey. Yay!
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2016
Wow what a roller coaster ride! Bella frustraded the hell out of me in chapter 2-8 goddamn. Anyways i just want to say thank you for sharing this story xx
TabBrookefiction chapter 11 . 7/7/2016
I love this story, ever since the beginning. I'm sad it ended but I'm glad it got its happy ending. beautiful just beautiful
Jordanfan360 chapter 11 . 7/6/2016
Loved this story!
I don't know how I missed it, but I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Your words were beautiful and the story was just aaaahhh! I got all the warm fuzzy feels. So thank you for sharing this story with us. Me. I love it. There's so much more I could say, but I can't find the words. If you're still writing FF or OF, I bet it's amazing. I'm gonna have to look for more of your work. *Fingers crossed that there's more, so much more! Lol*
mskirara chapter 11 . 6/28/2016
That was a really sweet story. Thanks for sharing.
Jaygm chapter 11 . 6/26/2016
Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I loved the characters and the plot. It was hard reading their first seven years wondering when Bella was going to finally figure it out. Loved Rose and the family dynanics. Hate to say good bye to these characters. Thank you.
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 11 . 6/20/2016
Loved those two so much! They're banter and relationship is just adorable! I'm gonna miss them!
Paolina Beke H chapter 11 . 6/9/2016
Beautiful story, truly loved it!
MDtwiwriter chapter 11 . 5/29/2016
I loved going through this journey with these character's. I absolutely loved this Rose, she was the best bff. I still don't understand how they stood by and watched each other with other people for so, so many years but it did work out in the end. Thanks for sharing.
end2097 chapter 11 . 5/28/2016
I really enjoyed this story and I'm not sure why I haven't read it before! I'm going to drop by the iTunes iBook store and see if I can pick up your published story. I think I may have read it already... But I'll check it out again! Thank you for sharing!
Browns chapter 11 . 5/27/2016
Browns chapter 10 . 5/27/2016
I get it, but I don't get it. That's a lot to go through abs put your loved ones through just to prove something to yourself.

Then again she made the gut wait for seven years.
Browns chapter 9 . 5/27/2016
Browns chapter 8 . 5/27/2016
Getting back on track.
Browns chapter 7 . 5/27/2016
Things are getting better. And it's getting late here, but I intend to finish this little fast burn (nothing slow about their burning) tale...
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