Reviews for The Invisible Line
twiclare chapter 5 . 3/11
It's so hard reading about them being with other people and it just not being right!
Ness1956 chapter 4 . 3/11
I'm glad you started the story in their present day because I would be dying waiting for them to get together!
wolffia chapter 10 . 3/11
Just 1 chapter left? Awww... I'm gonna miss this! Thanks for the update! :)
miss0sunny chapter 10 . 3/11
One of my favorite stories ever :)
redviolet chapter 10 . 3/11
Honestly, I forgot what this story was about and had to speed read thru the other chapters to remember. Then I remember how much I like this story. Then I remembered how long and full your chapters are. This chapter was super awesome and such a feel good story. Great families good friends, good food & spirits...I loved it!
roxiegirl chapter 10 . 3/11
That was a great chapter! So much happened and it was all perfect! Can't wait to rec this to my"complete" only friends!
Taylor9901 chapter 10 . 3/11
I love it.
2old4fanfic chapter 10 . 3/11
funny when stories take on a life of their own. My first house had an orange countertop with melt marks, but it took two years before we could afford to redo the kitchen. memories
Guest chapter 3 . 3/11
SarahCullenxxx chapter 10 . 3/11
Naw, I just love them! Look forward to the next/last chapter :) x
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 10 . 3/11
I was holding my breath towards the end of this chapter worried Bella would insist on trying the long distance thing and take the job in New Mexico. Thank goodness she turned down the job. What about an online publication? Then she could work from anywhere right? I love that Edward proposed on Christmas Eve/Christmas early morning. Beautiful story!
EnchantedbyTwilight chapter 10 . 3/11
I flove that used Albuquerque in this. That's home for me now; although, I did meet my Edward here and why I chose to stay!
Romana973 chapter 10 . 3/11
I love this couple. And their sense of humor has me laughing out loud. Thanks for continuing their story.
twiclare chapter 1 . 3/11
I can't believe they held out for so long!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11
This is a great story!
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