Reviews for Grimmjow and Ichigo love!
otakuZ chapter 8 . 4/26
A few grammer mistakes ok, A LOT OF grammer mistakes but because it was so cute im gonna forgive you and i cannot believe you ended it like that you should really do a sequel and WHY didnt you let shiro find love he was a jerk in this but i really like him but it was cute anyways
Naruka Ann Uzamaki chapter 8 . 1/28
I loved this.
I wished it was longer and you wrote about their kid or kids.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/8/2014
Alright now that you're back could you please rewrite this whole story, especially the grammar and spelling. The story is good, I can tell but you jusg need to fix it amd if you do you'll get more great reviews because I have read you other stories of Hetalia they were goo and more understandable keep it up pleas!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
please fix the grammar errors! it's really hard to read and ruins the story!
briar black death rose chapter 8 . 10/5/2014
Best of luck. The fact you had someone shoving anime down yer throat sucks
Baka Kage Usagi chapter 3 . 8/2/2014
I'm sorry I tried I really did but I couldn't get past this chapter there were so many grammatical errors I couldn't bring myself to finish it. It is a good plot line you have, you should look into getting a beta or if you have one a better one.
athea chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Ok the story wasn't bad but there were so many grammatical errors that I could'nt enjoy the story fully.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/20/2014
You suck at writing.
Tsukiro chapter 8 . 9/20/2013
Love it! Please contrinune!
XxxBeautifulWishxxX chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
Please continue the stoty is very cute and cool.
Lofi Lokison chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
im definitly willin' to wait
kyuumihaira chapter 8 . 7/15/2013
Please, please do a sequel!
Badru chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
Great story! But um...chapter 6 is confusing me with the lemon part...ah when did Ichigo's name become Ichiro than goes back to Ichigo? It uses Ichiro a lot in that chapter though
isagawa.yoko chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Awwww cutee gimmy and ichiigooo x3 well yeah there are some spelling prooblems but it doesn't matter, is unerstandable, the first chapter andbi like it 3 it 's cute 3
PeppermintStripes chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
You should really rewrite this story or at least reread it and correct all the grammar mistakes. I'm not a grammar nazi but you have mistakes in practically every single sentence. It's really distracting and keeps the reader from getting into the story. Such a shame. I do hope you make corrections.
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