Reviews for Naruto the Ultimate Lifeform
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8
when in the battle with both ben and kevin Naruto had thouts on the time chame he was in and it the time of it he saying to it pary time ...boy it was a wars with it ,
Guest chapter 7 . 7/2
when before the war get going Naruto had sit it the other part of his new villange a old home he mack it in to a hading out his own think and rand home to sheelp in and some had thout it was for him to live in when he was bounyhuhther and it was full of ships he took out and times even kingfish roys old ship is here to as a bar and full of art too form the mob boss own homes and penhound too
Guest chapter 3 . 7/2
my god mother tsunade when you get this note kown I having not dead out out like you thout the namikaze money and schools will be in good hands now for a new vaillge will be born on the same way you grandfather and granduncle hd whis for when it took me a long time to let you kown it will be good to see you ,here some snkle for you and it was good to .when it a old shld home Naruto had foiund in the bad lands the 2 founders had live in Naruto had it for when when bounyhuther woking and living in it he had time to think of his god father and mother and the others too . he had took the mob money and some art too when he live in the bad lands , when him and his dad get to live too the 2 had woking for it .
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25
wen Naruto ad his dad live in others parts of the citys the 2 had be to Naruto was woking the bounyhuther jobs he get to woking it and then he was it the mob run inc he find the men had money and gold art too and some books he keep and then he had a starship form the outlaw guop he took out and buit it up to he own now the fox nights a war ship he had mack into a home for some time before he get his own vaillge mack toin ,when in he had a men cave mack into a ber room office with his thors form the men and woman he stop and some time he keep a vr art too ,
Guest chapter 3 . 6/24
you think I am dead fool but the day one time you will see I do not dead off susike and you little bich ass gril too see too . when in the city kown as lost ones Naruto had buy out a warhouse b a home to live and woking too ,when his vaillge is get buit too, Naruto had buit his men cave room in the west side of his home now a bar office and some vr games he had keep too , like bunny grils Naruto had put in to keep it on too as will some catgrils too ,
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24
with his muscles on him is 40 times then most kown of his job as a bounyhuther is kown too some and when it the mob boss own icn Naruto find it all and took it with him and use it to buy out some starships in kown starwars old shipyards and other know sf earths . his home in the soth side of his vaillge is a lab in it a office with art form kown evil earths Naruto took out , when in his office is old time foes on the wall and some thout his crzy is not good too .
Guest chapter 6 . 6/15
when the kids when on the home vaillge Naruto too had some thing to do his was his men cave full of vr and some old smp ship he find and buy out too .
Guest chapter 3 . 6/15
when Naruto took down the old ninja goup out he then was in the same gave yard he had put the bouny of a ninja of the sound in the guound and was out of it now , when he meet and took out some ninja thinfes it the mob run inc inc he then took the men money form them and some money lainges too and uned it bu out a old starship to fly and owner of a ship call firefly he put in his own bedroom and some art too on the wall as will .
Guest chapter 10 . 5/31
if I Robert Krause do it sakura will be one of Naruto wife and the 2 had 2 sons the q will be name minato the 2 and the 2 one will be name of Sammy Leroy ,mei had 1 dather and charmcaster had a son ben fox ,and mei had a son Robert sonford . the guop living in a cub home west of the vaillge and some time Naruto old men minato had a solitude life now rand books and wathing the kids too.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24
when gwen and Naruto had took over the eath and then move to his fromer home the 2 had buit a new army too and ueds it to took out the vaillge and boy he do it too, when in power Naruto sit on his thoerd and in his room was some hot grils in it saruka ion tenten trmald as will 3 from the clound fuu and gwen too saruka had sit with Naruto with a him holding her and his hands on her bodds too say so you think of susike you little bich you now my little pet now and boy she saw Naruto had her in bed with him as his littlepaly thing now and he was gaving a good time too. when he was over her he put her in the back room and he had a fuu in bed now and she say my lord I am now yours and boy she was .
Guest chapter 10 . 4/24
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GreenlNtrn chapter 2 . 4/18
Crap Crap crap crap. This story stinks.
Man as if Naruto is that strong. He ain't anywhere near half the strength of waybig or d others
Huey chapter 2 . 4/9
I don't know how to say this but... your story is bad. How can Naruto be so invincible like dat as if he x dat strong. U have weakened every other character and made Naruto so invincible n dis makes the fiction suck. Why try to follow facts to give make him invincible where he needs to be n hey, he ain't invincible in the Ben 10 universe lyk dat.
Jenjen chapter 2 . 4/9
I guess u must be some sorta Naruto fan. Look u need a balance equity in a crossover fanfiction, u can't make 1 over higher Dan 1.
D last tym I recorded, Naruto x no where near way big so please stop underestimating characters 4 yur fav to pop up. It made your fan fiction ' crap' to read, excuse me
RogueAssassinNaruto chapter 1 . 3/24
it's galvan not galvin
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