|Reviews for The Beginning of the End|
| Maellowyn chapter 10 . 3/19/2011
I just can subscribe to Arwens view.
You wrote an entertaining but in some parts a little bit confusing story. Especially because of the rapid changes of peoples relations in it. (yeah and Ooc happens to all of us sometimes..)
But in the end - Mab is back - and that is all that matters hooray!
Yeah and you kicked that annoying Nimues butt.
| Arwen17evenstar chapter 10 . 3/18/2011
I think you have a lot of great ideas, but you're right it does go OOC quite a bit. But I still enjoyed all the same. Thank you for sharing it!
You've got a ton of creativity, only the writing technique itself needs some improvement. So keep writing, definitely keep reading, and you'll get there.
Thank you for the yummy mab lesbian sex!