Reviews for Keeping Me Down
ZenBall1878 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Awww... I thought Jasper and Alice would get together in the end. That was sad. But the writing was definitely nice
LikeYouBelieveInMe100 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
aww... im kinda happy and sad she didnt go back to him... im happy cuz after som many times of someone breaking your heart sometimes you have to say enough is enough, im sad because i guess i am one of those ppl that believe everybody deserves love in someone else.. any way nice job!
Fogs of Gray chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Woah. What happened to make him leave? Amazing, though.

Another keeper. :)

Keep writing,

ash902 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Hey Miss! Forgot to tell you how much I loved this one...although is did make me kind of sad. xoxo, me
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
So sad somehow!

Will we learn what was the reason why he left?

(Bringing my review over here from the contest page: Good luck for the contest!)

jadedandboring chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Beautiful story.

I'm curious about what his reason for leaving was!
CharliDenae chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Great story! Actually, I hated this story - but it was soooooo good! LOL!

I love my Jas and Ali to have a happily ever after, but this story was so well-written and, yeah, he treated her like crap. Good for Alice to put herself first, for a change. Great use of the song, as well!

I really loved it, in fact, it was the first story that I read of the Jukebox entries. I won't say who I voted for, just that there were a lot of great stories and this one stood out for me.

ox Charli
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 3/18/2011

I don't quite get why he "had" to leave, and why it was dangerous for Alice?