|Reviews for Jealousy|
| Lupin3Black chapter 14 . 8/22/2013
This is a wonderful story, it's sad, angsty and cute, I love the way that Sherlock made my croft make John forget, it shows that he really cares for him, in a sort of oblivious Sherlock-way. Well done
| TheSherlockianGoddess chapter 14 . 8/17/2013
Nahara101, give her a break. She wrote what came to her mind. And naturally, people that haven't experienced rape wouldn't understand it. And quite frankly, neither do you. So stop acting like you know everything about rape. Take it from someone that has been, you've got it all wrong too.
| Nahara101 chapter 14 . 12/30/2012
Yep. I don't think you understand rape... Lube wouldn't help, neither would punching the rapist in the face! Not that I know for sure, I haven't been raped, but I do know it's not as simple as you seem to be making it out to be. I'm not going to lie, by the end of this my face was scrunched up in disgust by how blatantly you treated the subject. I really enjoyed the first part, it had a good concept and was well executed. I also thing you did well with the emotional relationship between Sherlock and John- with the confusion and such. My only problem is you started rushing, treated Rape to easily, and also made it seem like you can only have a relationship if you have sex... Sex is nice, but if you need it for a relationship, you need to find someone else. That's my opinion anyway.
So, good start and intriguing concept- though it fell apart at the end.
| Nahara101 chapter 11 . 12/30/2012
This story is seriously starting to disturb me. I don't love anyone the way that Sherlock is supposed to love John in the story, but I do love someone (in a more school-style intensity), and if anyone raped them, even my closest friend or brother- the rapist would be dead meat if I could get my hands on them. My blood is near boiling point just thinking about it... Sherlock once through a man out the window for Mrs. Hudson, I think he would have no problem, and would take pleasure in, killing/doing SOMETHING against Mycroft...
And now giving Mycroft a new love story? You 'feel sorry for him'? Do you understand rape? You don't seem to... Sorry, went off on a bit of a rant there, I'm passionate about the subject of Rape and don't like when it's taken so lightly... Though, maybe i'm wrong- I haven't read the rest of the story after all.
| Linaceae chapter 7 . 10/27/2012
I don't know how I have to think.
On the first hand, John would have been traumatized if he knew all, but in the other hand, make him forget isn't the solution.
I'm a little sad that Sherlock asked this, even if I found him absolutly lovable :)
Fortunately, I know that this isn't the end ;p
So I just wonder what you have put in the following
| Linaceae chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
Ah ha !
Now Mycroft can't do anything but bow before the power of love !
| Linaceae chapter 5 . 10/27/2012
Oh no... I knew it !
Please, Mycroft have to interfere...
| Linaceae chapter 4 . 10/27/2012
And... Oh no !
Don't tell me that Mycroft has moved John..!
| Linaceae chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
Come on ! Sherlock sure is stronger than two little guardsmen !
We're talking about John's safety !
I wonder if Mycroft is serious about his love thing.
| Linaceae chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
I loved Mycroft...
Why are you so men toward him ?
He's such a shitass... ;'(
Continue Sherlock ! You have to be faster !
| 1sunfun chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
| Puggle chapter 14 . 6/30/2012
That is a really great piece. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
| bookgirl 121 chapter 14 . 4/17/2012
I just found this story a few days ago, so have had a lot of chapters to catch up on, which I have loved reading!
Really sad to hear that it's ended :(
Brilliant story !
Thank you so much for writing it :)
| demonkatgurl17 chapter 14 . 2/26/2012
) I liked it, very cute despite the angst at the beginning
| ceres51892 chapter 9 . 11/16/2011
Wait. I'm confused. If Sherlock And John kissed before and confessed their feelings and all that, why is John still going on dates with Sarah? Not cool, John.