Reviews for The Fountain's Promise
K.C chapter 8 . 12/12/2012
score 1 BB ;D
K.C chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
Wow awesome story XD
Uchiha Riddle chapter 40 . 9/16/2012
"WHAT DOES THAT HAVE TO DO WITH YOU KISSIN' ME!" LOL! That was the best line EVER! I'm so quoting that!
Kyndeyrn chapter 2 . 12/15/2011
So I finally started this story. :D The fact that it's a "Western" makes me super excited!
DaJapican chapter 50 . 11/24/2011
Never read a western Death Note story before and I have to say it was quite good seeings how I read it in one day. To be honest I didn't think it would be a very interesting story because of the setting but you proved me wrong. The plot was great and the action scenes where in nice detail. The only thing I didn't like about this story really was Lights death. I don't understand authors obsessions with killing either L or Light in their fanficts. Beyond is a dick, felt the urge to say that; oh and having Misa murdered made me strangely happy, even if she was preggo. Adding to favs cuz it was so interesting. One last thing, I couldn't picture L being country to save my life. His dialect wasn't very twangy but it was strange when it came out every once in a while. I couldn't help but think Brokeback Mountain the whole time I was reading this. -snickers-
killing u with umbrellas chapter 50 . 10/29/2011
loved it.
Aimett chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Oh god... I waited and waited to write this... I can't believe it took my whole day to read it... I mean, I've never been so absorbed in a text and NEVER read something with such an obssesive anxiety, as I did with mangas. I congratulate you for that.

I'm amazed. Astonished. I found myself cracking up from laughter and crying like a baby... Especially with Light's death and, while oddly enough, with the "Aiber's Saloon" part. Gosh, I felt rivers pour down my eyes. That itself is surprising. It's hard to make a reader cry because a non-protagonist passed away. I congratulate you - by 2.

For being a fanfic, I felt it so well written and structured that I had a hard time picturing the people in my head as Death Note's (already) existing characters. They were very out of character, and I found it troublesome at first. But I fell for them with the newly created personalities. I even had a moment when I thought "This would make a great story one day". I congratulate you -by 3.

Your writing skills were so detailed and fantasticc I could practically see it like a movie in my head. I must admit, I had the urge to draw a specific scene many times. I'll probably end up doing so, but of course, always attributing to your awesome work. I congratulate you -by 4.

Despite the sudden turn of "Everything is good" to "Eeverything is bad", the story felt so naturally good that the harsh and tragic ending was the best. It made it realistic, contrasting the fantasy details in it. This is also applied to the relationships. Such frenzy, such delirious and dependant pure love... a thing many writers avoid... I think it wouldn't have been that good if it was a staight relationship (which would have added a more dramatical side...ugh). They added a little frustration to the feeling which made it more attractive. The fact that they tryed so much to suppress the passionate feelings... Simply awesome. I congratulate you - by 5.

So that makes it 5... 5 congratulations from my side. I just loved this story. I wanted to read more, but I guess this was the perfect ending for it. You are very talented and I hope you keep writing as I will read all the stories you write.

Thank you so much, again, for such a well-thought, interesting, brilliant, amusing, romantic, captivating and formidable story.

With my most deep respect and gratefulness, I bow to you.

I enjoyed it SO VERY much! :D

FortunateM chapter 50 . 9/18/2011
An enthralling and strong tale of immense pain, retribution and redemption.

The early bond between Light and L (Lawli) was very natural and endearing, however, the story unravelled with such ferocity and pace, that it was difficult to read at times.

It was hard hitting and relentless in its pursuit in maiming Light mentally and physically, and with his constant pain and suffering you actually wanted him to find a parchment Deathnote in order to embrace the darkside and unleash his wrath.

A brave piece of writing which I enjoyed very much, heartbreaking ending, but the possibility of a union between the two in another lifetime, makes it that much more easy on the heart.

Well done.


XxHeartlessKissxX chapter 50 . 8/28/2011
ZOMG...awww..and I don't want the Matt and Mello oneshot..I NEED IT! Haha, thanks for the amazing story *hearts
Berebescu bazagra chapter 50 . 8/23/2011
I just have one thing to say to you: Thank you.

Thank you so much for writing and finishing this story. If I could, I wouldn't have changed any of what you did. I have this thing where I like it when main characters die. It's just awesome. And I love it when fanfics get completed. It seriously doesn't happen enough. So, yea. Thank you for the lots of enjoyable hours of reading!

Take care and I hope the best for you! :3
Berebescu bazagra chapter 48 . 8/21/2011
Hey, hey! I think I make the third person. Yaaaaay. Oh man, what to say to this chapter! Uh, um. I almost wanted to cry! Light, you sacrificed yourself so that Lawli(That's an adorable nickname, by the way) could live and so that the world could have the Fountain. Ah, I'm tempted to go reread the prologue, which I remember mentioned it being called "Light's Fountain" ... or something very similar. Ahhh, I'll check after this review.

What else to say? This is the first Western fanfic I think I've ever read and it's amazing; so well written and interesting! I don't care if only three people reviewed, it's definitely a great story from start to finish. The ideas, everything. I'm really bad at putting into words my admiration for the dedication and hard work you put into this story. I can't wait to read the epilogue, see what happened afterwards.

Thanks so much for this story, I'm glad I read it! Take care and until next time!

(oh, a little PS.: I can now say I read this WHOLE story while listening to Judas by Lady Gaga, haha. It just made itself the theme song for this story for me.)
XxHeartlessKissxX chapter 48 . 8/21/2011
o.0 Light died? Whhhhhaaaa? *coughs*At least it wasn't L...oh and what was Mello thinking? I guess I'll see...*sigh* loved it :)

Felicia chapter 48 . 8/20/2011
I'm glad you let anonymous people review your story ! I've read your story since the beginning of it and I really liked it, your story is just so unusual ! The fact that you choose to turn the DN character into some cowboys is really good ! It's one of my favorite DN story !
XxHeartlessKissxX chapter 47 . 8/19/2011 Mel! why? cause we all love plot twists of course! Loving it, missed a couple updates apparently..but still yummy!
Berebescu bazagra chapter 47 . 8/19/2011
Don't worry, I'm still reading! You'd probably get more reviews if you didn't have it set so that anonymous people can't comment, but oh well.

Oooh, Mello P.O.V.! He's such a jerk, I don't care what anyone says. _ And I want to smack him, but at the same time praise him. Auuugh, the fountain's gone and L is dying? On the other hand, he killed Beyond (thank goodness, that guy was insane). Ahhh, I can't wait to see how this gets resolved. ; ; THEY'RE ALL GOING TO DIE, AREN'T THEY?

Thank you for the chapter, I'll keep an eye out for an update! Until then, take care!
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