|Reviews for In This Together|
| SofitzPercabeth chapter 12 . 5/4
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/18
This is quite an old story but I just felt the need to correct you. Always good to be correct when writing, right? The crocodile god's name is Sobek. You switched the e and o.
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/1
Sobek not sebok dude...
| RainblazeLeopard chapter 2 . 2/23
Carter, why would you run?! Don't run from Zia!
| The Kane.lover chapter 12 . 12/10/2016
This story is so heart touching. I really did think Carter was proposing on chapter 12 though.
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/21/2016
This was a beautiful and cute story. But, I would like to point out that Zia's last name is actually Rashid and it it is Sobek no Sebok
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/26/2016
| WyldClaw chapter 2 . 3/27/2016
i can't believe he ran out like that! he's such an idiot
| Ambergreen chapter 18 . 3/8/2016
It's Bes not Bess
| The Golden Warrior Princess chapter 1 . 2/16/2016
Zia is the eye of RA
| Platformer Help chapter 4 . 2/15/2016
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/3/2016
Can u make a chapter with sadie and anubis and how they turned out
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/1/2016
dumbass mother fucker your so retarded Carter you shoulld've stayed with her dammit.
| Mason chapter 19 . 10/23/2015
I don't know if this guy is still making these, but THIS WAS AWESOME!
I'd LOVE to see more of this story, going into detail about Zia and Carters marriage, since at the end it said Zia Kane. Also how they raise their kids and teach them the way of the gods, and more ZARTER!
10/10 - One of the best I've ever read.
| ManunaTheChampion chapter 19 . 9/18/2015
Love it. Keep up the good work. :D