Reviews for Within Me
zi chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
I liked it until tyler said he loved marla
lightning veins chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
ugh this is so adorable. it's written harshly, simply, and so perfectly - you did a great job in depicting jack and marla's relationship. :)
SALJStella chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
I do love those two... _ And you! I love it how you write out of Jack's perspective, you can really hear Edward Norton's monotone voice in your head. XD And Marla is so lovable, even though she's annoying! 3 those two!