Reviews for Chosen
ArmyWife22079 chapter 5 . 5/24/2011
In case u didn't know the flight from DC to Montana (helena) is about seven hours (I live in dc-well reigen int and dullus int are the closest airports to me and I live in ft belvoir va so the dc area- and I had never got a streight flight, my family and I tend to get the flights with the layovers in utah which makes it 8) its so pritty and I wanna go back soon...and Helena is so small the street lights still blink after 10 pm. You need work on spelling and your grammar, I know people arnt perfect (I sure ain't) but I'm seeing consistant mistakes that a beta can easily fix. Hope to read more soon
darkplayer35 chapter 5 . 5/23/2011
Very interesting take on the story. I look forward to seeing how it develops from here. Please update soon.
Chi Vayne chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
Very sweet chapter.
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 5 . 5/21/2011
i loved it.i can't wait for more.
GinaStar chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
So cute!
Bobboky chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
good
Snarky Granger chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
Aw...what a sweet story so far. I love how Buffy is so taken with him. :D
jgood27 chapter 4 . 5/1/2011
Love this story and can't wait to read more
reader1writer1 chapter 4 . 4/26/2011
Good chapter. Interesting town you've built
ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
i loved it.i can't wait for more.i can't wait to see Dumbles reaction when he meets Buffy.
krynny chapter 4 . 4/23/2011
yeah this is so good it is totally cool. thanks for writing such a wonderful fic.

hugs and kisses

krynny
Taboo22 chapter 4 . 4/23/2011
interested in reading more
reader1writer1 chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
I love the story so far-not so much Montana, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it as it goes along.
faneka chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
I'm looking forward to the next update. Dumbles and DE's had best be careful, you don't want to upset The Slayer, Red Witch, White Knight, Faith or Ripper. It could be hazardous to your health.
jgood27 chapter 3 . 4/18/2011
Love this story and can't wait to read more
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