Reviews for Lucky Girls
Titaniavs chapter 15 . 3/23/2014
Another amazing story congrats! I really loved the interaction between the twins with Miranda & Andy...it was great you explored this mother-daughter dynamic as well, very beautiful, and contrasting with the relationship Andy has with her family. The detail about the roses, that really got to me...it doesn't get more unique than that! And of course all the interactions you created between Miranda & Andy were great...the sunrise and sunset descriptions were very special and just opens a lot of ides and feelings. Thanks again for sharing your talent, take care!
Utterby chapter 15 . 1/29/2014
It has taken me about a week to read this, and I absolutely loved it. You are so natural with your words, your dialogue is brilliantly realistic, and you paint a lovely picture. It was funny but not a farce. I don't always believe a softer Miranda, and I'm not saying your Miranda is all hearts and flowers, but you really caught me up in the story right from the beginning, despite my aversion to a softy. Thank you so much for a lovely story.
jazwriter chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
I just reread this today because I needed to read a happy ending...love your characterizations and how you reveal Miranda's softer side (including her insecurities) in such a believable way. Tay was so cute, and the girls have obviously matured, as reflected by how much they want Miranda to be happy and complete. Great story and a HAWT love scene (although I did curse you several times for the slow burn-that said the make out sessions and sleeping together were sweet).

Jazzy
AnonBliss chapter 15 . 9/18/2013
such a sweet storyline :)
Like a fairytale :)
mlgummer chapter 15 . 4/2/2013
A beautiful story.
MsSir chapter 15 . 11/9/2012
you have a way with how you build the characters. you allow them to be confused, unsure, and even angry, with going from one extreme to the next. that's just one of reasons I enjoy your DWP fan fics. thanks for sharing.
LethalPoison chapter 15 . 4/8/2012
Great story :)

I couldn't stop reading it
Gun Brooke chapter 15 . 7/10/2011
Thank you for posting such a wonderful story. I could easily follow both womens emotional rollercoaster and the girls' too. It was brilliant (and evil) that each step vi their relationship seemed to last forever. The final lovemaking was breathtaking.

This story entered my top ten Mirandy!
EmPoweredBeing chapter 15 . 6/20/2011
A beautiful story!

Thank you for sharing
Skald of Freya chapter 15 . 6/3/2011
As with your other stories this one is excellent, I loved it.

I really enjoyed the measured pacing, and even if the pace was fairly slow there was always progress. Some stories are far more extreme in the progress towards a new relationship, I liked that there wasn't really any angst or denial. Both characters were fairly open and forward in their intentions, they didn't dance around each-other frustratingly for the entire fic.

As with your other fic I love how you manage to write the "family", the twins are great and all their interactions are really dynamic and real.

Thank you for writing!
AssortedScribbler chapter 15 . 5/23/2011
I've been lurking, shamefully, in the DWP fanfic pages for a few days, enjoying the best fics you guys have to offer. But this fic is the first one I simply couldn't resist reviewing. I've been up from 6am to 1pm reading it, and when I got to the line reading 'Epilogue' I was suddenly hit with an incredible sense of personal loss.

I would have given anything for this fic to carry on forever. Logically, I know that what you have written is so unutterably perfect, this request seems ridiculous, but I kept avoiding looking at the chapter number, so I wouldn't know how little I had left to read. I cannot express how much I enjoyed this. It's quite literally become my favourite thing to read on a rainy day, with a blanket around my shoulders & warm crumpets slowly cooling because I've ignored them in favour of reading this.

Your characterisation of the girls, and Miranda, and the marvellous Andy were all so gorgeously wonderful, a reader simply can't help falling in love with them all within the first few lines. You capture Miranda's delicate-as-ice side with an effortlessness I envy! I've gone through every emotion with these women, as if I am there, I've giggled with them, I've cried with them, and if I thought for one minute I could kidnap the twins without being torn to shreds, I would.

In short, a masterpiece. Please don't ever stop writing.

AS xx
saphique chapter 15 . 5/9/2011
that was magnificent! thank you so much for sharing with us! Great ending :)
saphique chapter 13 . 5/9/2011
brilliant chapter! I adore the scene where andy suggests coffee to Miranda
saphique chapter 7 . 5/8/2011
awww poor jealous Emily! :(
saphique chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
i adooooore this chapter! so well written :)
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