Reviews for Lucky Girls
Clio1792 chapter 14 . 3/19/2011
I am reading the conclusion first...a bad habit...but just to let you know that, on the basis of my reading of Chapter 15, this is *excellently* done-love the "mountainous steps" Miranda is ascending after a grueling 36 hours of worrying about her daughters...and what did James whisper to Miranda before he left to board his plane?

You have been at work on this a long time, and it shows in the pacing and the attention to detail (Andy knowing she will have to go back for her cell phone charger, for example).

Is Andy's father really that upset at the revelation of his daughter's identity? That seems a great pity...have you considered writing a story where he reconsiders?

More later,

Clio
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