Reviews for Can't Be Alone
MiyuIsihami chapter 1 . 6/7
Sooooo cute, poor dick
PainInSilence chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Good story...good story...
Rowen Saige chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Great job please do more although you don't have to because ending it here is good too
BarbaraGirl chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
OMG! I love it!
Wintress chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Batman was capable of feelings? He was capable of having emotions?

well he's not Red Tornado
xXxMidnightsMelodyxXx chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Aw poor Robin. He has a dark past and he just wants to make sure Bruce is okay.
wiz-witch in training chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Ah, gotta love those midnight plot bunnies...I should be writing that, shouldn't I?\


"He had already finished off seven hundred and thirty-eight robots"


Robin: Hey, would the opposite of "impressive" be "pressive"?

...Unimpressive. That's the opposite.


"He had already beaten the console's high score twice for the day."

Again: impressive.


"sounding more like a whimper of a puppy who had just been brutally kicked in the chest and was sent sprawling across the floor only to hit a wall"



"from hitting the concrete after being thrown out of a second story window"



"Then, figuring Robin was alright"

...Right, because the description in the paragraph above is the definition of "alright". *eye roll*


"It was like trying to take food from a dog: taking the wrong approach means you lose a finger."

How bad is it that I think Robin's more dangerous than the dog?


"Of course, his nightmares were about the world running out of cheese"

...That's so Wally.

Wally: Hey!

Well it is.


"Batman was capable of feelings? He was capable of having emotions?"

Don't forget, Batman's human.

Muse: Coming from the girl who thought that Batman wasn't-

Don't bring that up.


"They were just hashing at old wounds."

Nice metaphor-type thing there.
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
You know, at first I thought that the description of Wally's videogames were just that. Pointless description for the readers to visualize the entire surrounding. However, that last sentence - my favorite sentence - brought it all together. I absolutely loved how you ended this story with the robots hashing at old wounds. It definitely fitted the story wonderfully. :)
Ansa88 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012

daddybats is so cute, but gods. i can't even imagine what it'd be like for robin. oh my gods.

crying in my heart, and it hurts so bad for the guy.
fallenfromthetop chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Faint bit of fluff there. LOVE IT! Update your other stories soon!

:) maristhesealatin
DanielCrayon chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
oh wow the endind was brilliant, more spacifically the last sentence... it was ironic in a way... this was rreeeeaaallllllyyy good!
Hawkpool chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Oh I love this story! Great Job!
Abigail Thalia La Rue chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Yes, more, write more you must. Love ya!

-Abby T. La Rue
nequam-tenshi chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This is such a bittersweet story.
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
That was sweet. Interesting, though...can't quite put my finger on it.

You just need to watch out with speech tags, by the way. You tend to bury spoken sentences in paragraphs.
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