Reviews for Beneath The Rose
xSpiteWolfx chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
this stories awesome, are you still writing this?
P3MF Alpha 3-Richter chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
"You hate it when i'm right, don't you?" He teased. Kate just snorted and went to clean up.


Anyway, this is going for an interesting start, I'l have to read the rest later.
justnick chapter 4 . 8/9/2011
Heir this is a good story and I hope you can continue it , by the way I haven't heard from you since the forum died ...whats up ?
Taking a Chance chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Please update! You have a much better vocabulary then most people on here, and your grammar is to die for compared to everyone else. You write action and arguments very well so I look forward to reading more.


~ Chance
CGWolf '95 chapter 4 . 4/23/2011
You're making me look in the dictionary for each chapter because of the amazing vocabulary. You're teaching me more than my English teacher at school.

I think I know what's happening to the caribou, but as you asked, I'll keep my hands off the keyboard and keep the thought to myself.

Can't wait for more!
CGWolf '95 chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
Again, nice vocabulary. (Had to look up some more words, such as copse and infidelity.)

Grammar and spelling is pretty much perfect. And I'm loving the story. Although, I'm wondering who these other wolves are... I'll keep reading, and hopefully find out. And yes, Micah is cute. :D

*opens Chapter 3*
CGWolf '95 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
First off, I absolutely have to say that you've got some excellent vocabulary. I actually had to look up a word or two to figure out what you meant.

Second, I've just started reading this story and I'm already enjoying it. It was amazing how "in character" everybody was.

But, I did notice that the names weren't capitalized a few times. You might want to keep an eye out for that.

Besides that, I found no mistakes in spelling or grammar. Keep it up! Time for Chapter 2... *clicks NEXT*
Dylano146 chapter 4 . 4/19/2011
I've only read ch 3 so far and I will tell you what I tell everyone with a good story. It is nothing short of amazing and has a very wide range of vocabulary which adds an intense richness to the story. I don't see much of it and I'm impressed. I usually read the M rated stories cuz I love good romance. I haven't read a single story that didn't contain any romance. Above all I look forward to possibly reading more but I do understand your home school posistion and I don't blame you. I was homeschooled once.
Eatingadonut chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
You have a very interesting writing style. Bit of random info I read your stuff from the KFP section, didn't expect you to be an A&O fan as well.
Bravobravo chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
Not boring Heir, highly interesting, you have me hooked. Keep updating or it will be ME who ends YOU hahaha.

justnick chapter 3 . 4/4/2011
nice and i will bring one
Riddikulus Flip chapter 3 . 3/30/2011
wow as always amazing.
Riddikulus Flip chapter 2 . 3/30/2011
Amazing story beautifuly written.
Bravobravo chapter 3 . 3/24/2011
I loved it, another great chapter, good grammar by the way
Soildier chapter 3 . 3/24/2011
Interesting story, good part is you have your OC's sorted. Negative is your going way too fast. You need to have the North plan, recon, weaken, and then attack. Hope this gives you some ideas. Take Care

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