|Reviews for The Deception Affair|
| MLaw chapter 4 . 4/4/2011
like where you are taking us with this...and chapters 2-3-4 much easier read that ch 1 !
keep those posts coming? More please?
| MLaw chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
am enjoying your story so far, but one note...it is a little difficult to read as you have your words grouped into large paragraphs, if you pare them down into smaller ones, it would make reading a lot easier. Also noticing some grammatical errors and some word repetition.
thanks for posting and good luck with your stories!
| PACTNMMT chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
An intriguing beginning! I hope you update soon!