Reviews for Untold tales: OC one-shots
Question42 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
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Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 32 . 1/6/2013
Egads, woman. This is categorically brilliant. It's so clever. What the hell do you mean you can't write poetry?! It's so effing IC as well - well I know you own Adonia, but I mean as in it's really relevant. And I just realised the painting thing is like alternative universe metaphor... I'm now going to analyse this poem. Be prepared ;)
The last two lines are particularly amazing, by the way. They're really, really Aaronia. Gah. Love. Love. I'm dead.
SapphireOceans chapter 31 . 12/23/2012
I really...can't describe this. You get pieces of writing which are sad, yes. And this is sad. But it's more than sad. It's haunting. I often find that re-collective stories are the saddest of all, and you've really pulled that off here. Well done :) My tears are on your conscience. :P
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 31 . 12/23/2012
I don't really have any words. Just so beautifully sad. This cannot happen, because I will cry if it does. Forever. And ever. And ever.
Adonia /3
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 30 . 11/5/2012
Oooer, intrigue O_O
So good. So good. Your characters are so complex XD We need more Faithy in our lives. MORE FAITH. I DEMAND IT. :D 3
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 29 . 10/16/2012
Simone D: 3
This is really good. Really good. I love her attitude towards stories (not because I agree or anything... XD) and the way you write her. She must be happy! I command it! :D So awesome. Looooove.
I'm two behind now, aren't I? XD Dammit.
SapphireOceans chapter 28 . 10/7/2012
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Why are our charries so messed up? XDXD
I really want to throw Aislinn in now...just to stir things up XD
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 28 . 10/7/2012
Ooooh, exciting AU :D Such scandal XD
But this is really awesome. Steve is so cool XD Write moooooooore, missy :P
deadaccount756795 chapter 28 . 10/7/2012
Loved it!
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 27 . 8/29/2012
This is so amazing I have no words. Adoniaaaa! D:
I will gladly write two in exchange for these. Although I think it's Sapphy's turn really :P
Write more, maestro. Or else.
SapphireOceans chapter 26 . 8/28/2012
They're all beautiful! Well done with the 100 words! You have some lovely punchy last lines here as well; I especially love the ending to the Steve drabble! 3333
Keeeeeeeeeep writing!
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 26 . 8/28/2012
None of mine? Offended. *huffs*
Pahaha, totally joking. Loooooooove them! 333 I'd attempt to guess the characters but I'd be scared I'd get them wrong XD
I think I might know the last one though... maybe... ;)
Dammit, my turn... :P
Just Slightly Obsessed chapter 25 . 8/8/2012
There are no words. So beautiful. Just... spectacular. Gasping the whole way through. Love. Pure love.
SapphireOceans chapter 25 . 8/8/2012
I'm sorry, but I can't express my love in words, so this is a crap review, but please, just imagine me waving my arms around me like a lunatic windmill. Then you'll be able to picture my reaction. Not even fangirl hands. Fangirl arms.
WeAllLiveInAZazeySubmarine chapter 24 . 8/8/2012
Awww, Adrion! He's so cute, bless his little cotton socks XD
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