Reviews for A Step Too Far
chanalam chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Just... Amazing. I love this, Ste hitting Brendan, the whole "Walk Away" thing. Then "I care about you." N'aaawwwww. :) x
Sinceslicedbread chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I've only just stumbled upon this story. It was great, really emotional and intense. You just can't help rooting for these two , whatever the circumstances. Let's hope it works out for them.
foxy x chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
aaaaawwww that was so sweet :) hopefully ur gonna do another...? :D xx
Devon.c chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
hi, i hav read thi before, acturlly about a MILLION TIMES! BUt i hav been forgetting 2 tell u what i think...well...I LOVED IT! PLZ PLZ make a sequal or at least another chapetr, i really want 2 see if he comes out 2 the whole village in your story. love loads...gd job! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Devon.c chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
hi, i hav read thi before, acturlly about a MILLION TIMES! BUt i hav been forgetting 2 tell u what i think...well...I LOVED IT! PLZ PLZ make a sequal or at least another chapetr, i really want 2 see if he comes out 2 the whole village in your story. love loads...gd job! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
iscreamloud chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Awww, loved it! x
BigTimeStarKid-1 chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Aww!

How sweet, I like how you got Brendan in character, when he didn't say 'I love you too' but 'I care about you too'.

It's really an amazing story, please write more like this, I'd definitely read them :D
Empathist chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
That was very intense and believable and the characters' voices were captured really well. I was pleased it had a happy ending (for now at least!)
Tracy-Lou chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Aww what a great story! So believable as well, I forget sometimes just how controlling Brendan can be but it's only because he wants Ste so badly. Glad they made up in the end :) I hope there's more to come..?