Reviews for Hook, Line, and Sinker
nanna chapter 1 . 4/5
yes, please do continue
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
:)
pepper203 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Plz contunie
shootingstarsandjaybirds chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
:) Continue
AnimeRoxx chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
That seems so accurate! Wouldn't that be cool if that is what they were really thinking? Keep it up :)
Rapidez chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Yes, you definitely should have continued with the story, it was nice, but it was still more or less what really happened and there weren't any extra emotions, I think that it's been all mentioned in the episode. It might be nice if you kept adding a bits of your own here and there, but it still created a nice story. Not a brand new one, but stil a lovely story - and the part where Zane does not know were always my favourite. ;)
claraoswin124 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
loved it! please continue
Krystalslazz chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
continue!
Zandaya chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Continue.
Sarah chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I think you should do a sequel about how Rikki and Zane are feeling after the kiss, like conflicted, happy, sad, worried. Then you could have Zane tell Rikki how he really feels, or vice versa.

But Anyway, I really liked your story and you should definetly continue!

~Sarah
SAMRULZ4EVA chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
keep writing this!
kittenamos chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Please continue! :D
rae ryder chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
yes plz continue
smylez13 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
COUNTINUE! it's so good i luv that episode
Sudoku.Music.Banana chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
So this isn't much of a oneshot, but it is a good chapter 1. are you going to continue?
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