|Reviews for Visitors On Vacation|
| SpaceRoses chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Oooowww...I hurt myself this chapter. I think it was Samuel and the 6AM blues. I relate...I relate so hard I nearly made myself hyperventilate laughing.
And the fact that Marcus nearly side-swiped the 5th Column church-mobile (if the V get the 'Party Bus :)' then the 5th Column gets the church-mobile :P ) and Hobbes cusses like my dad when he's driving makes me laugh too.
Super-nervous Chad is wonderful...that guy is freaking terrified of Anna and it's hysterical. She still got a crush on him? P
Great work on this chapter and I can't wait to see where this train-wreck of joy is heading. At least Anna decided to go along with them AND the best part is she thinks it's her idea. P
| Ithileon chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
Cue hysterical laughter. And the comment about Hobbes smoothly covering his ass, my mind translated that two ways, and the second was not appropriate. At all. Oh well.
| ZeldaPotter chapter 2 . 3/25/2011
This is so damn funny! Can't wait for chapter 3 :D I love chad and Tylers idiotness xD and I know how Samuel feels. I HATE 6Am iiiiiiiiiiiiit!
| Delete Moi chapter 2 . 3/25/2011
At this point, Thomas grabbed Chad by the neck and smashed his face into the hood of the Escalade.
Nearly choked on my lunch laughing at that. And I love how you tie everyone in while both cars are on the highway-very nice.
And the thing about them not taking a shuttle...was that a reference to them using it as the Party Bus :) instead?
| speedy2green chapter 2 . 3/25/2011
This rocks! Hilarious! Funniest thing I've read in a long time!
| Delete Moi chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
This will be absoulte chaos...
| AlleluiaElizabeth chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
"Agent Erica Evans has a lot on her plate.
For example; (...) keeping her clinically retarded son alive,"
Ah yes, this looks like it will be a fun story. XD
I liked your portrayal of the humans of the series. Jack bribing
Erica with muffins puppy-dog eyes was funny.
I see you keep the whole Joshua/Marcus buddy dynamic from the diary series, so huzzah for that. :D And yay for Ryan being in here, too. :)
I do wonder: what about Syd? The 5th column's science guy doesn't deserve a vacation? :(
| speedy2green chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
This is great. Very funny, and after that good but very tense season finale, a little comic relief is needed! I can't wait to see where you take this!
| Ithileon chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I was laughing by paragraph 2. You're a genius.
| ZeldaPotter chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
"Don't you think the turtleneck look is getting old?" Finally he saidsomethibg about that! Annas goinng on vacation with them right? God I can't wait for more :D