|Reviews for Moby Dick's Shortcut to Glory|
| GreatKateZonkeyMachine chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
It was a strange read, to be sure. Kahlan said just about all I wanted to say - nice poem, excellent closing line, no grammar problems.
A crossover with iCarly, eh? Now there's an idea. I might have to make a sequel to "Your Worst Nightmare"...
| ka has moved chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Don't like this... You're kidding me, right?
This definitely isn't the worst crossover ever concieved. Actually, MBS has been crossed with "Glee" - now that's pretty bad. It's also been crossed with Twilight. You'll be hard, hard pressed to get worse than that (unless with iCarly... [shudders]).
Anyway, I couldn't spot anything wrong with this, and I loved Connie's second poem. The only thing I can tell you to make it better is to italicize said poetry to separate it from the story. It's a bit confusing at the moment.
And that line at the end? About Madge?