Reviews for The Sacrificial Lamb
harkie5 chapter 1 . 12/12/2024
Super cute story! I loved it. Thank you.
CynMar Rom chapter 1 . 5/2/2024
Such a cool idea! I'd love to be a goddess too!
Thanks for sharing!
Azlady2003 chapter 1 . 2/7/2024
love
tammy0208 chapter 1 . 4/6/2019
I loved this story. Feel so awlful for Charlie being all alone now though.
ladymagna1100 chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
I just read this fic and enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing.
GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I really enjoyed reading this and I thank you for writing and sharing it with us!

Becca
sunfleur chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Beautiful tale
irishnlove2shop chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Freaking loved it! Nice twist that she was a gift from his sister, and not going to "the great one". Also liked how he watched her since she was born through the animals, and already loved her and knew her! Perfect ending with her being a goddess! :-)
4MeJasper chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
This story was fascinating. He had been waiting all that time. I should have guessed the seer was Alice...too fun.
SydVish210 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
This story is so different and sweet. I love the mythology aspect of it. Well done
Ezmarelda Elizabeth MacKlintof chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
wow i can see why you won...great writing! maybe you can make a story off shoot using this one-shot as a base...because i really loved it!
radioactive77 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Thanks!
futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
I really loved this! It's like a fairytale or a myth, and you wrote it very well.

I love how Bella's sacrifice turned out to be not really sacrificing. She's always been good, so she deserved a happy ending. Although, her life is only just beginning as a Goddess.

I also liked how Edward didn't just wait for her. I mean, he's a God who turns into lions and other animals, so it's not a realistic story at all, but the fact that he sought female company until Isabella was ready to be sacrificed is very realistic. I loved that SM's Edward stayed a virgin for more than 100 years because it's romantic to think he waited for his soulmate Bella, but this more 'real' Edward definitely has something special too. And when he's speaking to Isabella and he's so unsure and anxious is the beginning, he's so adorable! :)

I loved how you made Rosalie the Goddess of fertility.

Oh, and I cant believe how stupid I was for not seeing earlier that Alissandra was supposed to be Alice, lol! Even with the fortunetelling/foreseeing stuff. It only connected when Edward told Isabella! *facepalm*

I think this is a great story! And congratz on your first place!
dazzleglo chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Great story so unique.
princesssparkle01 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
I think this is so good. Would love for there to be more of when they marry and have a baby then when bella returns with the baby. Lemon was great would love for more. Please let me know!