An amazingly bloody story, really impressive for some one who rote it at 9. I can not wait until he finds the other four weapons. I must know if he manages to kill tue general, but what I really want to know is what exactly did the general do to get such a sedate ex lunatic after him; any way, good job!

Excellent story, enough blood in the first chapter to make it coo, but not disgusting. Well Done! :)