|Reviews for The Man and Wolf|
| LucasJG chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
An interesting concept. But I feel that the poem resembles a lyric for a song cause your sentences are very short. Plus, Poems are not rhymes but small stories that show a reader the expressions of the writer, one other point is the making sense of the story.
For example you wrote at the end that the wolf turned to the man and grinned, I know that this is imagination but you need to explain why the wolf would do that, why would the wolf run with with the man. These things are important for poetry, not because it's a story, but a story with intense feelings.
By showing us the readers why the wolf became friends with the man can have a great impact on your poem. If you want to you could check out a poem I wrote for reference: s/11961577/1/Short-Story-Star-Fox-The-Past-is-lost-forever
So there's my opinion, hope this helps. ;)
| chgchmgfchmgcm chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
great poem,I would read it a million times
| Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
hey can i make a full blown story outta this? it's great!