|Reviews for life is not a snapshot|
| HopeWithinDarkness chapter 1 . 2/23
BEAUTIFUL. LOVE LOVE LOVE
| Athena Goddess of the Wise chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I like this. It's...original:) And beautiful.
| believe in nargles chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
This is absolutely amazing.
I enjoyed the flashbacks - it gave us a background on your interpretation of the characters - and liked how you tied them into the story.
The ending was beautiful. Sad, but a little hopeful.
Wonderful job! (:
~believe in nargles
| AshleyofRavenclaw chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Amazing story! I'd love to see more if you could. I felt as if I was part of it. Great Job!
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
I love you! RoseScorp, slightly bittersweet romance, touch of angst AND TeddyVic in ONE story?
Honestly, I loved the plot, and how Victoire didn't come off as a bad guy, because who could be wrong in loving Teddy, especially when she was made for him.
Ahhhh! I just want to gushgushgush!
It was adorably sweet, and totally Amy-Zhie-ing and GAH! It was like, squee!
I should NOT write reviews at 20 to midnight.
| fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Alright, so this is my "official" review for the Love Triangle Challenge
Writing: (4/5) You have excellent spelling and grammar, though the sentence structure of a few sentences could be tightened up. There were a few awkward word choice and misplaced commas, but these didn't interrupt the flow of the story. Your writing flows beautifully, and really helps me get into Rose's head. I also really liked the overall structure and the flashbacks, though I would have liked to see more continuity with the use of brackets.
Originality/Creativity: (3/5)Unfortunately, the core idea of the scorned girl mourning over her lost relationship with a guy at said guy's wedding to a beautiful girl has been done quite often. However, the character influence and the creative aspect of this fic tempts me to give you a higher score...
Characterisation: (4.5/5) The characterisation is gorgeous, as usual Mad - the photographer Rose isn't one I've seen often, and Scorpius is his usual fanon self. Teddy and Victoire are also very fanon, though I would have loved a bit more insight into her character - ah well, another idea, another fic, yeah?
Use of Prompts: (5/5) Your prompts were mirror, autumn, moonshine, fight and crushed. After reading it twice, I only remember you using the prompts fight and crushed, but after going back I realised you used them all! Congrats on that! They were well used, not just metnioned here and there like "it was autumn." Instead you continued it, using autumn in a symbolic way to add more depth to Rose's inner reflection.
Overall Story (4/5) As mentioned above, a very nice little piece though not without its flaws.
Great job! And thankyou for participating! )
| BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
That was super, Mad-O. :D You did a brilliant job on it. I loved it. XD
| centralperks chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
'It may take a little time, but you'll see the bigger picture'.
Oh yes. I know this song :)
Anyways, this was just heart-wrenchingly beautiful! I don't often read Teddy/OtherCousin (onesided or otherwise), but, I was on your profile to send the PM, and I saw the title and was like 'hey!'.
Rose was so beautiful in this fic.. so innocent but so understanding at the same time. There was no Victoire-bashing (cause that girl is AMYZING), but you could tell there was bitterness, even if you had not spelled it out for us :) Teddy was so..cute. And annoying. Cause, hello, the guy is buh-lind. But he was so lovable, and he needed to end up with Tori, anyways.
The hint of ScorRose was like..'ack!' Cause I wanted it to go longer so they could actually, you know, get together. -dies-. But, oh well. There will be more ScorRose oneshots from you in the future, no? -wicked grin-
The camera symbolism was perfect, and the lyric line was tied in very nicely.
| Thanatos Angelos Girl chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
This is good! I love the ending quote. Great job! Oh and by the way how did you make a new story now? It keeps on giving me a error screen when i try to. Anyway though Rose deserves to move on! :)
| I Am Me And I Can Fly chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Ah, isn't this Harry Potter? It's in the iCarly section. I'm assuming it was an accident.