Reviews for My Twilight
Jasmine chapter 23 . 11/26
Puhleeze. you might think that no one reads your stories, but everyone oes!
Jasmine chapter 19 . 11/26
You should make Amy and edward brake up, and then have bella and edward together. I can't bear to tahve them apart
Jasmine chapter 11 . 11/25
You should make her a virgin, then have Edward*ahem* Blake take it.
jkkhreedy chapter 22 . 8/1/2013
Please continue! I would like to see how this story works itself out. Love this story!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
Didn't quite follow the conversation. He had at least one of what?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
I was kind of expecting the Queen to be Maria or Alice. I guess this is really different from original Twilight.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Great chapter. What a depressing world for a human. Is there any hope?
EskimoEskimo chapter 21 . 3/6/2013
This in an interesting story. I like that you renamed and added new characters, and essentially made up your own world. This doesn't feel like twilight at all... it's much better! I am looking forward to your updates!
4MeJasper chapter 20 . 8/12/2012
Well this was cute: Carlisle picked that moment to pipe up. "Umm, excuse me, do you think that I could have a say in my future?"

Nope, not at all, poor thing!
4MeJasper chapter 17 . 8/12/2012
Ummmm...interesting dream.
4MeJasper chapter 15 . 8/12/2012
4MeJasper chapter 14 . 8/12/2012
Ummm...somebody's getting a mate.

And Alice has a child.
4MeJasper chapter 13 . 8/12/2012
Watching the werewolf games!
4MeJasper chapter 11 . 8/12/2012
"Scream". Now that's not an order you want to hear coming from a vampire, even if Edward is testing Jake. Yikes!
4MeJasper chapter 10 . 8/12/2012
Death sleep. Interesting concept.

And Bella didn't get to eat? She's already skinny-being hungry because someone else hasn't brought food is very difficult.
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