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| yamilaruiz chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
God charm me your fic! c:
Please try and follow him that's great, love's jealousy towards Derek Adam, and I really liked that there compared to what sientio when Sam came out with Casey. That was perfect, I also like very much that Casey wants to be fun and spontaneous, and you want to risk. c:
Love your writing, please keep following
Pdta: I am new reader, I hope to continue this fic commenting cuendo later follow him! ;) LOL
| Kare6Bear6 chapter 5 . 12/13/2011
I really like this. :)
| jess chapter 5 . 11/10/2011
This story is awesome! I love how you captuered all the characters. Adam is so funny. I can't wait to see more of their crazy antics. Haha!
| Younme21x chapter 5 . 8/6/2011
Lol. I always pictured Adam as that guy from the upcoming movie Fright Night, Anton Yelchin, who was also in Star Trek and Terminator Salvation.
Anyway, hilarious story. I actually like the flirtation between Casey and Adam. I am a Dasey shipper by heart, but come on, Adam and Casey seem adorable together!
Update soon! :)
| Constantinox3 chapter 5 . 8/5/2011
Pleaseeeeee continue! I LOVE this story! :D
And LOL. Literally. At Adams part in the store. You did an amazing job! :)
| ChristmasonPancakes chapter 5 . 8/2/2011
This story is amazing. Astounding. Hilarious. It is just so REAL, and NO, you are NOT going OOC. There has not been ONE moment in this story where I said, "Casey wouldn't do that". There wasn't one moment in this story where I thought Derek was out of character. You just captured them perfectly, this story is DRIPPING with their incredible chemistry and hilarious dynamic.
And just to mention, I AM IN LOVE WITH ANDREW-LEE-POTTS. And it's SO WEIRD that he was your inspiration, because I'm not even joking, he is LITERALLY who I imagined in his VERY first sentence Adam popped up in. No. Freaking. Joke. Maybe it's because (ironically) I JUST watched Alice. (In my mind, I like to pretend that Adam will find a love interest at the end of this; a spunky, brave, pale girl with bright blue eyes and black hair, wearing a blue dress, introducing herself with a smirk, "Hi, I'm Alice"...SHUT UP, IT'S MY DREAM!)
But Adam is literally the FUNNIEST thing in this entire story. First of all, the Gunter line. FUNNIEST. FREAKING. THING. EVER. "Our firstborn's son will be named Gunter, a hearty boy he will be" I LAUGHED SO HARD. Then the "Dolly" sequence. Actually, the entire STORE sequence had me giggling while my family gave me odd looks questioning my sanity.
OH MY GOD, AND GRETA. HOLY SHIT, SHE'S THE BOMB. I love her SO. MUCH. "Use protection." I love that even a 70 year old woman can see what's going on with Derek and Casey, even when her sight's probably going...God she's just so spunky and amazing. And that when they tell her again that they're step siblings, she just shrugs it off as if it isn't in the least bit consequential. Seriously. Greta is a Dasey shipper.
But most of all, I love Derek and Casey's interactions. The toe exchange. Holy shit, I was laughing my ass off. The first strip club had me in hysterics. The second had me nearly choking on excitement, because Derek was so...confused! And it was amazing and fantastic! And it broke my heart that Casey wouldn't take Derek's jacket, BUT TOOK ADAMS! I was just...GUH! The rose scene was cute, but really what had me smiling ear to ear was how jealous Derek was, without you even having to outright say it.
So now I'm wondering if Derek's comment to getting Casey a Daisy instead was because she actually likes daisies better, or if it was a blatantly obvious and wonderful reference to Dasey. Which sounds so much like Daisy.
Of course Derek would "Brangelina" their names together, just toying with the thought probably gives him the biggest smirk.
So now I'm ALSO wondering how Derek and Adam are going to handle going to a Gay Club...Derek may not be TOO happy about that. But he'll do it. For Casey.
GOD how I love this story. Please please PLEASE put another chapter up soon, I know getting positive comments lights a fire under my ass (and I mean that in the NICEST WAY POSSIBLE!)
Thank you for entertaining me so much with such a fantastic story. Just...so great. Fantastic job. Just...GUH.
(By the way, can Derek and Casey watch the porno together? Pwetty pwetty pwease? I don't think Casey will let her Der-Bear leave her alone. He has better manners than that, don'tcha think?)
| Fellinlovetoday chapter 5 . 7/31/2011
Absolutely love it! I especially love Derek's jealousy XD can't wait for an update!
| al chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
Great story! I look forward to every chapter! it keeps getting more and more interesting every chapter.
| Samantha7571 chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
Loving it...I about died laughing about dolly lol
| ZenNoMai chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
I was dying waiting for this update.
| Nikki Gargol chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
Ooo derek is jello! L
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
It's 4am where I am and I had to stifle my laughs during the store scene. Adam is truly hilarious at that with 'Dolly' and Derek being king of the store was funny!
I 'awwed' at the 'I believe in you' moment between Dasey.
Jealous!Derek was outstanding! He came up after the store thing and at the fair and I loved every moment of it.
Adam is adorable when he's flirting with Casey. I 'awwed' at the rose moment.
The lyrics that Casey sang back to Derek...is there a hidden meaning in them?
Are daisies Casey's favorite flower or is that a little shoutout on 'Dasey' itself?
I'm loving this story and I wish I could join in on their fun (my 21st birthday was nowhere near as exciting/adventurous as Casey's).
| ZenNoMai chapter 4 . 6/9/2011
| FearofFalling chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
I am officially hooked!
You are one of my all time favorite writers on fanfiction so I'm like... so freaking happy to see a new story from you.
This looks good. More than good. Amazing! Gosh, talk about witty dialogue! So many moments that had me laughing out loud. And I don't laugh easily. hehe :P
| Samantha7571 chapter 4 . 6/7/2011
Omg love it