Reviews for Abandoned in the Jungle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Of course ... if you do make it into a Tommy/Lily story I would love it more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can u please go on with this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls go on |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, this looks intriguing. What a great setting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oohhh. nice start. i hope you continue. i love your scenery and my favorite line was when tommy said i turned at the coconut treee. i can see him getting defensive about that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE continue :) its great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, interested to see where it goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god - a cliffie ending! :-) How I love it! :-) Great descriptions in the beginning - wonderful. I am all for descriptions! Because it makes me, as a reader, see what you are imagining! Loved it very much! And I do love your plot ... Lily and Tommy, both somewhere unknown in the jungle, probably both hurt! Isn't that great? :-) I love storylines like that - and as you haven't categorised this story as "complete", I am hoping you'll continue this as soon as possible! :-) Can't wait to read on, find out more about what happened to Lily and Tommy, and who those men are that came up behind my favorite characters! :-) Well, well done! This story has already become an addiction! :-) Take care, Kat |