Reviews for The Next Ten Minutes
Toni Masen chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Ancora Imparo 83 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I love love love the original story. But your twist is exactly what I wished would have happened. I've yet to read a fic that makes me tear, but your one-shot managed to make me squeeze a few lol. You are an amazing writer!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
You are fantastic lovely story.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
You are fantastic lovely story.
deranged-dreamer chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
i dont think i would be able to forgive and forget unfaithfulness
ComeToTheDarkSideWeHaveC00kies chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I always love your writing... You have a beautiful talent. I lover this oneshot, it was dramatic, but very sweet.

Thank you for writing this.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
so beautiful! thanks
MoCullen chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
This got me interested in the original...thanks!
chevy09 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
oh this is good, i feel broken for the ending of paper heart hoping there's more in that story. Your one shot is a relief.
Wonderwallthefirst chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Really good. I read this first then went back and read Paper Heart. You really gave them a believable continuation. It almost felt like the original author wrote this. That's really impressive.
doroka2010 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Great job.
Magentablue chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Beautiful outtake. It was so sad after PH. I hope you do another follow up.
thunnababy chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
A heart breaking story, eloquently told, with an ending full of hope. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you.
AnjieNet chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I haven't read the fanfic this was based off of but after reading this, I will definitely check it out. I loved how you wrote their heartbreak and the eventual hope of coming back together.
JLPinNYC chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
So I'm not gonna lie...I was a hot mess after finishing PH last night. It was so, so, so good...and I'm glad I read it. :)

Now, to this...this was definitely my most favorite o/s EVER. Each step of the way through...especially the arbitration meetings, Bella's night with Riley, and in the hallway at Alice's party...I felt right there with them...hurting and hopeful.

And, I feel all fixed up...nice and new again.


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