Reviews for The Next Ten Minutes
Magentablue chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Beautiful outtake. It was so sad after PH. I hope you do another follow up.
thunnababy chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
A heart breaking story, eloquently told, with an ending full of hope. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you.
AnjieNet chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I haven't read the fanfic this was based off of but after reading this, I will definitely check it out. I loved how you wrote their heartbreak and the eventual hope of coming back together.
JLPinNYC chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
So I'm not gonna lie...I was a hot mess after finishing PH last night. It was so, so, so good...and I'm glad I read it. :)

Now, to this...this was definitely my most favorite o/s EVER. Each step of the way through...especially the arbitration meetings, Bella's night with Riley, and in the hallway at Alice's party...I felt right there with them...hurting and hopeful.

And, I feel all fixed up...nice and new again.


TwiDee chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Loved it...heart wrenching. Written so well...thank you so much :)

Love ~ Dee
I need a life bad chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Omg...I read Paper heart this morning and It killed me...then i was told about this outtake...which tore me up and thank you for giving us hope for their HEA
corporsl chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
Thank you so much for this! Paper Hearts absolutely broke my heart and this has given me hope again in HEAs.
Slytherella chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I can't thank you enough for writing this! I love love love PH, but it had me bawling at the end and I NEEDED an HEA. You nailed Hezpixie's characters and writing style, and it felt like the perfect natural progression.


I can sleep well tonight, knowing that Bella and Edward are finding their way back together. :)
ToDeleteAccount chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Great short story!

Everything that needed to be there, was!


oh werd chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
Great story. Love it.
Whitney Love chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
Loved the original by Hez. This was awesome. I love the thought of them getting another chance. Her story was one of the only ones I've read where's not a HEA. Loved it.


Lizzard43 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Such a good story. I was hurting for them and hoping that they could take their heads out of their asses and talk. I liked that your pacing was not rushed at all. Nice ending !
iloveeerob chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
you have no idea how much i needed that, you are outstanding and def. deserved first place. Paper heart left me heartbroken and for days i was devastated i don't think i have ever been so emotionally connected to a fanfic story before. Your ending was just as devastatingly sad and real yet so beautiful and just what i needed for these characters thank you so much for this! Congrats on 1st place you so deserve it.
majose chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I can definitely see why you won first place. It was a great piece. I still want to sack Edward for leaving.
meadow11 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
ok, so first can i just say thank you? thank you thank you thank you. i can't tell you how much i needed that. paper heart seriously broke my heart into a million pieces. i don't know if i have ever been so emotionally connected to a fanfic before...i absolutely loved it but that lack of hope at the end was purely devastating. you did an amazing job giving us hope. there is still no guaranteed HEA but at least we can hope for the best. loved it so so much. :)
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