|Reviews for Keep Your Friends Close|
| weemcg33 chapter 11 . 4/22/2015
I loved it! It was just like watching an episode and I wanted to slug Wo Fat at the end there, being all smug and getting Steve all worked up. Nicely done.
| weemcg33 chapter 3 . 4/22/2015
Just wanted to say that I loved Danny's rant, it sounded just like him and I laughed when he found out Steve had gone to the hotel by himself and told him to repeat his last rant because he had a headache lol
I can see him having many more of those ;)
| SeanJ111 chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
One of my favorite fanfic Danny rant moments:
"You could have been killed! Or worse!"
"Worse than killed?"
"Yes!" Danny yelled. "Worse than killed!"
"What's worse than killed?" Steve asked questioningly.
"I don't know! Maybe tortured and killed! Or mangled and killed! In any case, it would be worse! And knowing you, that's probably what you were angling for anyway!"
"Come on, Danny," Steve offered, "you know I'm never angling to get killed. Or worse than killed."
"Of course you're not! You're always too busy angling to get me worse than killed."
This really made me laugh! You have a great writing style and I was very happy to come across your story last night as I'd just rewatched that episode. I look forward to reading the rest of your story!
| cytpotter chapter 11 . 9/24/2011
Oh My Gosh! That was sooooooo good! And it would fit in with the show perfectly(other then the Governer part) even now! And just so you know I never did like Jenna! ;) But I can't wait to read your sequel! Thnak you for the great read!
| wotumba1 chapter 11 . 8/26/2011
the ending was just fine for me, had to get wo fat out of this situation and IMO that was the best possible way!
definitely going to read the sequel!
and watching the finale i'd say you're a prophet in your quotes ;-)
| wotumba1 chapter 7 . 8/26/2011
ROFL at danny's comment 'I'm not a doctor nor do i play one on tv'
wonderful - no, make that brilliant- reference to 'three rivers'
| Schroll91 chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
Loved it !
I think You chose rightly, And I like that Danny was hurt too, and that Steve had to make sure he was alright before checking out himself.
I love situations when one of them is hurt it really shows how much they mean to each other. And the way they tease eachother when they are sure everything is going to be alright, that is fantastic. And you nailed it. Loved this chapter.
| crokettsgirl chapter 11 . 6/1/2011
Excellent job with this. Loved how Steve got in the court room and Wo Fat just walked out all smug. Steve getting all upset and Danny reminding him that they were with Steve and would get Wo Fat...Once again an excellent job. Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 10 . 6/1/2011
I love the team interaction and teasing, the banter...excellent job at that and you answer all my questions like about the phone..lol...I'm glad you do the details like that cause those are things I think about. Great job. Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 9 . 6/1/2011
Wonder where they got the cell from..lol...also why they just didn't use the radios in their cars. Well at least Steve did have a plan for back up and now they are just waiting...Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 8 . 6/1/2011
boy it's going to be hard getting around with duct tape, maybe they can find something sharp to get it off. I'm glad that gun shots were just tires. Wo Fat is playing with them he could have killed them if he wanted to. Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 7 . 6/1/2011
I'm glad Danny though hurt was playing so nothing more would happen to him. I love how he explains why he is using Steve's shirt...oh boy Kono and Chin are walking into a trap. To bad they aren't bring back up...great job. Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 6/1/2011
Oh boy you are really good with writing Wo fat and what he is like along with the plot. Sending the post cards, trying to see who was after him and now to shoot one so more will come...oh man I hope they are alright. Great job I love the characters and how you write them all like I said the plot , descriptions , just the way you mapped and wrote out this story. Excellent job! Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 5/31/2011
You are so smart with the Dole plantation. What did you do look up a map around the area? I can't think of any other way that people know all this stuff..lol...I'm so computer challenged it's horrible. I was in Hawaii in the late 80's when I was young and remember going over to the Dole plantation but we didn't go in there.
Good chapter I like how you made that address up so that they'd check it out. I still love how you have Danny answer Steve. It's so them , you have the characters down so well. I enjoyed the chapter. Sue
| crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
I really like this story so far. I love how Steve got Jenna to safety and how he went and made sure she was safe.
This chapter was just so good. You do great with Steve and Danny. The Danny rant was fantastic and then how he got out of a second rant and said about did he want to know if Steve took back up all the way Danny would say it. I'd alert the story only it's finished so when I get to Keep your Enemies closer I'll alert that...great job.
my thoughts on Jenna is that you put her in with go reason and she did what had to be done to get the ball rolling for this story. I don't hate her and I don't love her I hope she doesn't stay on the show but here and there would be ok. Though I know that danny will need her to help clear Steve's name and clear Kono too. She went from dumb and teenagerish to knowing more than Steve which I thought wasn't right , they need to balance her character out and stop her from taking over where she shouldn't. But I don't hate her just if they keep her I how TPTB will NOT let her and Steve get together..lol...Sue