Reviews for As the Driven Snow
Givethemtriumphnow chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Okay, this definitely deserves far more reviews that what is has. This is brilliant, and all the more so for it's simple shortness. I loved the diction and abruptness of the sentences!
Rjalker chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Ooh. Very...I don't quite know how to desribe it. It's sort of got the feel of a movie, and all there is for sound is the slightest hint of music in the backround that you barely even notice.

And, the snow, it's just...it's perfect.

The entirety of the fic just gives off a cold vibe with darkened colors.

Agh, that last line. So creepy and suspenseful. So ominous. And all in 500 words o.O Bravo!
MSerrada chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Nice glimpse at her world within the apartment cell, and the touch of having Leoben return and be reflected in the glass with 'dark intentions' was as chilling as the scene outside.

Hmmm, just cause the challenge was for under 500 words, doesn't mean you can't write on-hint, hint!
6219834 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
I'm a sucker for K/L New Caprica fics, so this was a treat. I thought it really atomaspheric, with a quiet stillness - like during snowfall. Perfect. Thanks for posting.