Awesome story! Can't wait for more.

Nice! Please keep writing!

This is new! Are you going to add any other supernatural elements to the story? I like the way you showed both his foolishly confident side and Lizzy's hopeful, then offended side. Also, the fact that she found him attractive at first was encouraging. ;) It seems the story is moving quite quickly though, what with E and D meeting, then Bingley rushing in with news of Jane at the end of the chapter. I would advise adding some sort of section divider as well to make time jumps more clear, since no transition was written into the story itself.

Very interesting, I love it! I hope you update soon.

Poor Lizzy, that would be humiliating! Darcy is so clueless (for lack of a better word), thinking it all went well! I cant wait to see what happens when they meet up again.

Luv it. Plz continue