Reviews for Leaf and Branch
Hawaiichick chapter 11 . 8/29/2017
Thank you for writing such a wonderful and sweet story. What a fun read!
terehsa chapter 11 . 4/20/2016
I read this narrative as 20 times and still moves me
Auua Ytjoml chapter 11 . 6/9/2015
I would love another short musing from Elrond as Legolas arrives in Imraldis in time for the great council of the fellowship
this was beautifully written
Guest chapter 8 . 4/15/2015
anduin flows SOUTH.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/15/2015
nazg├╗l are undead not immortal
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2015
Elrond is bigger about the shoulders than an elf. actually Elrond is generally more heavily built than an elf. little Legolas' first impression should have been: HUUGE! but he does have the fine features, hair, and eyes of an ellon, so good.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/15/2015
you have extremely detailed descriptions, jastaelf... you really shouldn't spend that much time on exposition in storytelling. yes, give us the rundown. I'd like to know where the characters are, what their enemies are like, an idea of what they're wearing and general condition, but not super- intense, you know?
Flower chapter 11 . 1/13/2014
I do not like this chapter, for the bias is too great, making it painful to watch.

"For once she was proud"? Oh, so every other waking moment of Thranduil he's been a disgrace? Only when he's showing relief for his son that he's worthy of the other O Mighty elven lords? And you claim you actually like Thranduil? It is quite hard to discern from your writing then, if that is truly how you felt about Thranduil. From in this epilogue nearly every sentence drips with a condescension and distaste that was hard to describe if it is not your own opinion.

It is perfectly okay for other elven lords to disparage Thranduil, for that was merely jest; but Thranduil's pride must be totally thrown in the dust, because that was evil?
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asdfghjkjuhytredsd chapter 2 . 6/30/2013
So Legolas is almost of age?
citylights319 chapter 10 . 1/19/2013
Awwww yayyy
citylights319 chapter 9 . 1/19/2013
Omg. WHAT!
Reading Ella chapter 9 . 1/8/2011
What, he died? I could not read the content of the chapter because of the warning but I got the basic idea from the last two sentences. Now I have to know what happens next.
Reading Ella chapter 11 . 1/8/2011
Your story was so awesome! Do you write books because you could be an author for a living you are so good at writing. I learned a lot of new words from reading that and I normally have to read really hard books to find any words I don't know. I bow down to great writers like you.
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