Reviews for After the war
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Short, but sweet. It could use a little more detail, especially concerning the characters' emotions. I agree that the girls' friendship would be stronger, but somehow, I don't think everything would just return to normal. Character development means that at the end of a story the characters are different from how they were at the beginning. The war changed Ellen and Annemarie; sure they would try to go on with normal lives, but I don't think it would be as natural as you say. And what has Ellen been up to while in Sweden?

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