|Reviews for Creature|
| Ai Akira chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Haha i liked the story. Really humerous especially the ending.
Nice job. :D
| charisma1869 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
hhahahahahahaha what the fudge Takumi? xDDDDDDDDDDDDD
So funny! hahahahahahaha
| elle chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
That was cute! A story about Takumi observing Akira's actions!
Hope to read more stories of yours! Good Luck!
| elle chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Ahahah! That was cute! I really like your stories!
Please write more!
| PerfectMisfit chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
Wow. I really must be stupid, because until now, I had no idea you were on here XD. I mean, I knew, but I had no idea what your usename was...
Anyway, I'm still fairly new to this anime. Dsiscovered it pretty recently so I can't really give you much of a critique, but I did laugh out loud at the last line. I really liked this-it was really and enjoyable read.
Just one thing-I thought Fuuka Academy was spelled with two 'u's and one 'k'...that's about it.
| Minagi Mikoto chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Hm! Interesting story! All females are actually O-bake!
I'm very glad to read another Mai-HiME story from you, and I hope I can come back as well. Looking forward to other Mai-HiME stories from you!
| Arcane Jumper chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
| SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
The story gives a relaxing feeling it feels like I'm reading an omake of Takumi and Akira!
Make more it makes people delighted at the most times