|Reviews for Redemption|
| scarthegoth139 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
This is really good :) I would just like to say fantastic job with details because this is gonna sound weird but I'm sure you've probably heard it before, I felt like I was there watching it happen. There are a few grammer mistakes but very, very well done :) keep it up!
| DeathKid chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
This may be an interesting story... Anyways this still the begininng of this story so more to come, I kinda like it a bit. Used to play this from my NES system before.
Good luck to you good sir, may you make more and develop better stories in the future :)
| Inferno chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Make more chapters, this has potential